Niffer (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 11:36 pm (Our son's coming to us....)
Wow! I didn't see that coming! Hope Lynn is going to be okay and where is Paul?!?! Glad the baby's okay! Guess Justin was right that something bad was going to happen.
Author's Response: Yeah...we'll see about Lynn and Paul....Kale is a-okay though! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah...we'll see about Lynn and Paul....Kale is a-okay though! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 07:38 pm (Our son's coming to us....)
I know Justin and Shift are destine to take over the Pack soon, but I really hope both Paul and Lynn are okay.
And Kale needs to make it to his parents soon and safely. Hard asses or not, I don't think those two could survive losing him.
Great chappie! I didn't cry LoL, but Paul and Lynn's futures are still a mystery. Poor Justin. Can't wait to see what the fall out of all this will be. Whatever MC attacked them is in deep shit.
Author's Response: Well Nikki, I'm glad you didn't cry. lol We'll see about Kale....This next update will let you know which MC did it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
And Kale needs to make it to his parents soon and safely. Hard asses or not, I don't think those two could survive losing him.
Great chappie! I didn't cry LoL, but Paul and Lynn's futures are still a mystery. Poor Justin. Can't wait to see what the fall out of all this will be. Whatever MC attacked them is in deep shit.
Author's Response: Well Nikki, I'm glad you didn't cry. lol We'll see about Kale....This next update will let you know which MC did it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 07:04 pm (Our son's coming to us....)
wow i wonder what ahppened to paul...but i'm sure you'll tell us hehe
I love that even tho justin and aiden are so hard ass when it comes to one another their exteria just starts to crack because they are one aawww
Author's Response: Eventually I'll tell you what happened to paul. lol yeah I think they've found that balance with each other.
I love that even tho justin and aiden are so hard ass when it comes to one another their exteria just starts to crack because they are one aawww
Author's Response: Eventually I'll tell you what happened to paul. lol yeah I think they've found that balance with each other.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 06:15 pm (Our son's coming to us....)
I hope that everyone is okay. I hope they get Kale to Shift and Justin before anything else happens. I really love this and I can't wati to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: We'll see what happens in this next update! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: We'll see what happens in this next update! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Gigi (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 02:55 pm (Our son's coming to us....)
This story is my crack!
Author's Response: Awwww....this review seriously made my day! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awwww....this review seriously made my day! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
alimera (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 09:08 am (show your colors....)
Hmm, so Teak is moving over to the dark side, huh? Awesome!! Update again soon girlie.
Author's Response: Yep she's moving to the dark side! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yep she's moving to the dark side! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 10, 2008 07:08 pm (Are you fucking glaring at my girl?)
I'm glad that they are getting to have some time for just them. They are so great together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Me too. I love love love Shift and JT together! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 10, 2008 06:36 pm (Are you fucking glaring at my girl?)
Stupid girls! Shift looks hard ass and they mess with her? WTF!!!! LOL!!! Loved the update. Can't wait until they get to Texas.
Author's Response: I know stupid stupid girls! lol Thanks I hope you like this next update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I know stupid stupid girls! lol Thanks I hope you like this next update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 10, 2008 04:33 pm (Are you fucking glaring at my girl?)
Love the banner. Adrianna Lima & Justin - HOT!
This story just keeps getting better and better. Please don't let anything too bad happen at the patch over - don't go making me cry girl. LoL.
Author's Response: Nikki, glad you liked the banner. Wasn't Kale just cute as hell? lol Awww I'm glad you're liking the story...I tried not to make you cry but I'm not making any guarantees! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
This story just keeps getting better and better. Please don't let anything too bad happen at the patch over - don't go making me cry girl. LoL.
Author's Response: Nikki, glad you liked the banner. Wasn't Kale just cute as hell? lol Awww I'm glad you're liking the story...I tried not to make you cry but I'm not making any guarantees! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ambs07 (Signed) on Oct 09, 2008 06:30 pm (show your colors....)
I love this story already, please update soon!
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'm working on that update right now! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'm working on that update right now! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 09, 2008 02:39 pm (show your colors....)
Wow! Loved that Justin is possessive! Glad that Teak is turning to their side. Justin's right having someone in the ATF would really benefit the club.
Author's Response: Me too...I like possessive Justin! lol Teak is turning...I think that makes everyone happy so far. I thought it would help having an insider but we'll see how that works out because I'm not making any promises! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Me too...I like possessive Justin! lol Teak is turning...I think that makes everyone happy so far. I thought it would help having an insider but we'll see how that works out because I'm not making any promises! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 11:48 pm (show your colors....)
Oh pooh I can't see the banner :(
Ok I see what's happening now. Teak's falling for the Pack - she's gonna turn on the ATF, not them. I like the idea of that. I really didn't want to see Justin and Shift get rid of her. Now I am I right to sense something brewing between Teak and Trace? They'd be cute together.
Ok you got me worried about Kale. He may be riding with his grandparents, but being Justin and Shift's son, he's still a target. Then again, the title makes me think Paul and Lynn are the ones in trouble. As sad as it would be if they died, it would be worse if something happened to Kale so in the end I hope Kale is the one to survive whatever's coming.
More soon please!
Author's Response: I fixed the banner just for you! lol Well see what Teak's going to do! I'm still playing with a few ideas. There could be something between Teak and Trace but remember there are more members of the pack lol. I guess we'll just have to wait for the patch-over to see what happens with Kale. I'm working on an update right now so hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow but we'll see how busy I am. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ok I see what's happening now. Teak's falling for the Pack - she's gonna turn on the ATF, not them. I like the idea of that. I really didn't want to see Justin and Shift get rid of her. Now I am I right to sense something brewing between Teak and Trace? They'd be cute together.
Ok you got me worried about Kale. He may be riding with his grandparents, but being Justin and Shift's son, he's still a target. Then again, the title makes me think Paul and Lynn are the ones in trouble. As sad as it would be if they died, it would be worse if something happened to Kale so in the end I hope Kale is the one to survive whatever's coming.
More soon please!
Author's Response: I fixed the banner just for you! lol Well see what Teak's going to do! I'm still playing with a few ideas. There could be something between Teak and Trace but remember there are more members of the pack lol. I guess we'll just have to wait for the patch-over to see what happens with Kale. I'm working on an update right now so hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow but we'll see how busy I am. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 11:36 pm (show your colors....)
wow wasn't expecting her to turn lol
like you said don't worry about teak
Author's Response: yeah she turned....I don't know if she turned all the way but she turned! lol We'll see how that plays out! lol
like you said don't worry about teak
Author's Response: yeah she turned....I don't know if she turned all the way but she turned! lol We'll see how that plays out! lol
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 06:26 pm (show your colors....)
They still need to watch her closely. I love Justin and shift together, they are great. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: I agree. I'm super glad you love JT and Shift together...that ba-noodles! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I agree. I'm super glad you love JT and Shift together...that ba-noodles! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
alimera (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 10:23 am (You fucking shot my man....)
Wow, intense. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah the next chapter won't be soooo intense...at least I don't think so but we'll see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah the next chapter won't be soooo intense...at least I don't think so but we'll see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
