I just want to say, before I go into further detail, that this story was absolutely superb.
I found Justin to be exactly as I envision him in my head. He's silly, goofy, fun, and (at times) a 5 year old child. But he also has this incredibly endearing quality to him that makes girls melt in their shoes.
Ally was this fabulously complex person. She is insecure, jealous, spunky, and just so REAL.
I want my best friend to be Trace from this story. His personality is off the charts. His one-liners had me rolling in my chair. But he had this perfect personality trait that would take him to the comforting best friend level in an instant.
Lauren is exactly like every female family member that I have living in Tennessee. She is warm and compassionate and everything that little girls want to be when they grow up.
Now for the story:
This story was incredibly well written. I thought the dialogue was great. There was never a moment where I was left unfocused.
Often I find that writers lean on dialogue or narrative too much. This story had a great balance of both.
I think I enjoyed this story so much because it was a feel good, sweet read. There were enough twists and turns to keep me interested. In the end, it was just very real.
Lovely story. I am excited to read the sequel.
Author's Response:
wow... i don't even know how to respond to this... and believe me, it's pretty rare that i'm left speechless. lol.
all i can say is thank you! number one, i appreciate ya taking the time out to read this crazy thing and i am so, so glad you enjoyed it! it was the first thing i posted on here, so it's kind of my baby. lol.
and i am so, so, so happy the characters came across the way i intended. i wanted them all to be a little silly, but i also wanted them to be real, so it's awesome to hear that worked.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun, i appreciate it more than ya know!
hmmm...ok intrigued. my flu-ridden self is finally starting this. i like the premise, thus far.
"When doofus number two dropped out in the middle of senior year to follow the pop star around the world, nothing changed."
love this line haha
Author's Response:
lol ah yes...i've been tied down with the flu myself the last few days, and it is most definitely not fun. it took every last ounce of energy to get my butt on here and FINALLY update something. lol.
lol, i swear... i have the dorkiest sense of humor ever, but i'm so glad someone gets it! haha
Author's Response:
lol awww yay! unfortunately, this one is just about on it's way out. i've got about half of the last chapter written, but vegas has taken priority, and i've gotten kinda stuck. lol. writers block is such a bitch.
lol now you're gonna be on my back about two stories? jeez woman! lol.
Author's Response: lol thank ya! the next chapter is getting fairly close to being finished, so it should be up within the next couple days!
Author's Response:
thank you for the review! i love hearing from you guys!
Author's Response: lol, yeah she is a little nuts. thanks for the comments! reviews definitely make this fun for me!
Author's Response:
lol, thank you!
i don't know...guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out where she ends up, huh? lol
Author's Response: lol i'm glad you're enjoying it!
update soon please!! =)
Author's Response: lol thank you! You guys have no idea how much the comments are appreciated!