Comments For Wonderwall
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2009 05:34 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)

I just want to say, before I go into further detail, that this story was absolutely superb.

I found Justin to be exactly as I envision him in my head.  He's silly, goofy, fun, and (at times) a 5 year old child.  But he also has this incredibly endearing quality to him that makes girls melt in their shoes.

Ally was this fabulously complex person.  She is insecure, jealous, spunky, and just so REAL.

I want my best friend to be Trace from this story.  His personality is off the charts.  His one-liners had me rolling in my chair.  But he had this perfect personality trait that would take him to the comforting best friend level in an instant. 

Lauren is exactly like every female family member that I have living in Tennessee.  She is warm and compassionate and everything that little girls want to be when they grow up.

Now for the story:

This story was incredibly well written.  I thought the dialogue was great.  There was never a moment where I was left unfocused.

Often I find that writers lean on dialogue or narrative too much.  This story had a great balance of both.

I think I enjoyed this story so much because it was a feel good, sweet read.  There were enough twists and turns to keep me interested.  In the end, it was just very real.

Lovely story.  I am excited to read the sequel.



Author's Response:

wow... i don't even know how to respond to this... and believe me, it's pretty rare that i'm left speechless. lol.

all i can say is thank you! number one, i appreciate ya taking the time out to read this crazy thing and i am so, so glad you enjoyed it! it was the first thing i posted on here, so it's kind of my baby. lol.

and i am so, so, so happy the characters came across the way i intended. i wanted them all to be a little silly, but i also wanted them to be real, so it's awesome to hear that worked.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun, i appreciate it more than ya know!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 10:52 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)

hmmm...ok intrigued. my flu-ridden self is finally starting this. i like the premise, thus far. 

"When doofus number two dropped out in the middle of senior year to follow the pop star around the world, nothing changed."

 

love this line  haha 



Author's Response:

lol ah yes...i've been tied down with the flu myself the last few days, and it is most definitely not fun. it took every last ounce of energy to get my butt on here and FINALLY update something. lol.

lol, i swear... i have the dorkiest sense of humor ever, but i'm so glad someone gets it! haha




glowbug917 (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 06:52 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
Just a heads up, this is on my to-read list this weekend when I'm trapped in Long Island babysitting a couple obscenely energetic nephews of mine. So that way I can pester you to update two different things, haha. :D

Author's Response:

lol awww yay! unfortunately, this one is just about on it's way out. i've got about half of the last chapter written, but vegas has taken priority, and i've gotten kinda stuck. lol. writers block is such a bitch.

lol now you're gonna be on my back about two stories? jeez woman! lol.




sylvie (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2009 10:01 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
update soon......



sylvie (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2008 03:16 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
yaaaaaaaaay new update and PREGNANT omg thats the last thing i expected omg!!!!!! update this story as soon as possible

Author's Response: lol thank ya! the next chapter is getting fairly close to being finished, so it should be up within the next couple days!



SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Dec 09, 2008 03:41 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
update soon..............



joanne (Anonymous) on Dec 04, 2008 08:11 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
Please don't split them up yet, just getting used to them together again, they are good together.  it's not like they were together together and maybe the same thing happened on her side who knows.  update soon!

Author's Response:

thank you for the review! i love hearing from you guys!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Dec 04, 2008 01:04 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
I smell a fish! Could it be possible that Charlie and Darcy are working together to get the objects of their affections? If not that then the relationship gods just really have it out for them. Oh! And I do believe that Mrs. Darcy fell out of the crazy tree and hit every branch down! Great Chappy by the way!

Author's Response: lol, yeah she is a little nuts. thanks for the comments! reviews definitely make this fun for me!



SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Nov 17, 2008 07:21 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE but we can take  darcy out of the story like now right?pleasssseee lol

Author's Response:

lol, thank you!

 

i don't know...guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out where she ends up, huh? lol




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2008 07:12 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
yaaaaaaaayyyy!!!!!!!!! shes back to being his pa !!!!!!!



lizzy99 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2008 06:35 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
wow, i feel bad for Justin, im sure it's not easy watching the woman you love with someone else....anyway..great chapter! keep updating :)



SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Nov 03, 2008 06:48 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
update plzzzzz



Mel514 (Signed) on Nov 02, 2008 10:02 pm (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
Pretty sure I just started this and have become slighly addicted. They need to reconsile ASAP! Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: lol i'm glad you're enjoying it!



lizzy99 (Signed) on Nov 02, 2008 12:05 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
i love this story more and more each chapter!! im glad that Ally is finally realizing that she really loves Justin and that after all she wants to be with him =)

update soon please!! =)

Author's Response: lol thank you! You guys have no idea how much the comments are appreciated!



SYLVIE (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2008 04:15 am (Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
oooooooooo allys back to her senses let im soo excited to see whats gonna happen next!!





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