Comments For Trying to Get it Right
wishful thinker (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 03:32 pm (Chapter 1)
1st Poor Lauren boys really suck at times :?
2nd Let me break the chain is a classic line and now I want some one to say that to me
3rd I will be attending more wedding in the future :) lol
Love it so far :)
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 06:21 pm (Chapter 1)
its good from the start. cant wait to read next chapter
mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 04:33 pm (Chapter 1)
Ummm, writing is good, I like the interaction between J and L already. The only thing is, its so dramatic in the first chapter, car crashes, deaths, drugs, rape, abuse, and all just in the first chapter, it seems to be playing out to be a really dramatic story but I'll be along for the ride.
