Comments For Blurring the Lines
S (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2010 11:11 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)

I LOVE THIS STORY! 

The ending is amazing and the characters are complex. I love Kali and her daughter. 




Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 26, 2007 06:50 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)
No worries? No worries! That's all he says after three years. She moved out because of that. She quit because of that, that's why he has a maid who doesn't talk to him now. And that's it? No worries? Wouldn't it be nice if they talked about it? A little. Somewhat. Cause they could've been happy together... hell, they still could. But no worries means to me that it doesn't matter anymore cause he's moved on...to who? If I was Kali that's exactly where my mind would've gone, instead of thinking about the pie. Cause it seems like she still has feelings for him, so to even think that he doesn't really care anymore...I dunno. Sigh. I really wish this wasn't the end. The last bit was cute though, with the "watch your mouth" thing.

Author's Response: lol Well, this is all I have to say...as you may have noticed, I have a tendency to leave the endings of my stories kind of open ended, thus allowing my readers to kind of decide for themselves what happens next. So, if you want to think that "no worries" means he's moved on to someone else, you obviously can. However, I also pretty much always have decided in my mind what does happen next, and I will tell you that in my version of events, Justin has certainly not moved on to someone else. And yes, they still could be happy together, and there's a pretty good chance that they will be.rnrnI was originally going to end this story similarly, but with Justin actually married to someone else. I guess it's good I didn't, since everyone seems incensed enough about this ending, which I actually thought was quite hopeful! hahaha.



jerseygirl1833 (Signed) on Jun 25, 2007 03:47 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)
Ok so it says its completed...and you can't be serious...I'm hoping this means there will be a sequel...Please!



Vessy (Signed) on Jun 25, 2007 02:56 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)
i love this story, can't wait for more



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 25, 2007 01:05 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)
Umm...this can't be the end! Please...I am praying to the gods of Justin Fan Fiction that this is not the end! LOL. I mean I know the end is somewhere in sight...I can smell it...but not this soon! Anyway, awesome update! Hopefully, I can be waiting for the next one? LOL

Author's Response: haha. Gods of Justin Fan Fiction? Unfortunately for you, I am a fan fiction atheist. ;-)



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 25, 2007 12:32 pm (Wouldn't It Be Nice?)
i know there is more. i know u didn't just play us? no date? maybe a wedding? some more kids maybe anything? loved it but it wouldnt hurt for some more... dani



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 23, 2007 01:40 am (We All Fall Down)
wow more pls, asap! - dani



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 05:16 pm (We All Fall Down)
No! It can't end badly!  Justin and Kali are supposed to get together and live happily ever after!  Ok...so this isn't a fairy tale...but none-happy endings just aren't any fun :(  this is me pouting...lol....can't wait for the last chapter!



Mr_Mrs_JRT (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 04:23 pm (We All Fall Down)
OMG WAT THE HELL OMG IM SPEECHLESS WTF JUST HAPPEN.WHERES MA HAPPY ENDING LOL. it was a good Update i guess lol sry



Mr_Mrs_JRT (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 04:23 pm (We All Fall Down)
OMG WAT THE HELL OMG IM SPEECHLESS WTF JUST HAPPEN.WHERES MA HAPPY ENDING LOL. it was a good Update i guess lol sry

Author's Response: lol Yes, I'm very convinced that you thought it was good. And just so you know...as a rule, I don't really like writing happy endings. I'm not saying it'll be awful, but...yeah. Happiness bores me.



Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 03:28 pm (We All Fall Down)
Noooooooo! Dammit, that's not how it was supposed to go. I did actually tear up a little when Miri was clinging to Justin and begging him to convince her mom. Reminded me of the "But I wipe my own ass!" scene from Big Daddy...and he didn't get to be the daddy in the end for that one either. Maybe that's the way this is going. *sighs* But then for some reason, maybe it was the maid thing, it was reminding me of Spanglish, didn't the maid character have a kid too and lived in the house and then drama, drama? I dunno, can't remember. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hahaha...maybe you just watch too many Adam Sandler movies...jk jk. I am aware of the similarities between this story and some aspects of Spanglish. Basically unintentional though...



chicagokiss (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 03:02 pm (We All Fall Down)

I missed reading this story. :)




Vessy (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 02:27 pm (We All Fall Down)
wow great chapter!



lice_scott (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 02:26 pm (We All Fall Down)

Oh oh...

Can't wait for next chapter yay 




MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 12:49 pm (We All Fall Down)
I've been reading this story for a while even when it was over at NF.com but I've never reviewed it. I loooooooooove this story! It's one of the best stories on this site. And it's one of the most original. You're a great writer. Moving on, hopefully Kali will come to her senses. Please update soon.





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