Author's Response: haha I know right, seriously. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll put the last part up in a few :)
Her smile is a lot like Justin’s smile
That line makes me think Bella is like his sister or something! Am I right? Anyways I think Justin has a thing for Melanie....I so love her too but I do wish she would stand up to her boss like Justin said. But it was kind of heartwrenching that he didn't notice her for a year and thought she was new! That had to suck for her. Anyways just like everyone else I think this should be longer because I absolutely love it...but maybe it's a good thing it isn't because then I would never work on my stories lol
Author's Response: hmmm lol Yeah it's gotta suck when he didn't even know she existed. But guys can be dumb and not exactly take in their surroundings haha. I'm sorry it's not longer, but I will seriously try to think of something else haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: hmm interesting... I'll post the last part soon so it'll clear everything up lol. Thanks for reading!
their boss is a right ole wanker isn't he
Author's Response: Yes, their boss is a pure jerk. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: lol well first thank you so very much! :) I'm glad you adore Melanie, but I wrote the story for a challenge and it's kind of done lol. I'm sorry! :( Maybe I can come up with something else, I will seriously try to think of something. Thanks for reading and being so interested!
Author's Response: I'll work on it lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!