Comments For Waking Up In Vegas
Hollie (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 01:31 pm (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)

So I decided to write this view as a running commentary while I read:

 A few THOUSAND CDs? Bloody hell, where does she have the storage room... you don't know the real Justin? Well you might have if you both hadn't spent all that time playing ridiculous gameswith each other and don't think it was just him missy... the fact that he gets all jumbled up and doesn't know what to say is not a sign of not being honest, it's one that he loves you dummy... actually, being in the middle of a divorce and changing your minds wouldn't be such a lame story at all, people ro reconciliate ya know... Justin stop smirking, it's a smug facial expression that makes you look too arrogant... sneaking around? You were worried how bad a reconciliation would look but you think sneaking around when you're both trailed by paparazzi and very liable to get caught is a good idea? You idiot!... oh, and lying to Chelsea again is a BAD plan. You think your already unhelathy relationship should be rebuilt on a bed of lies?

Hot sex though. 



Author's Response:

lol yes! i love running commentary!

haha... believe it or not, i myself am quickly approaching 3,000 in my own cd collection.  and the storage room is pretty much where ever i can put them. lol. there are stacks of cds all over the place in my apartment. it's ridiculous. lol.

haha... you are soooo right on all of it. they think they're solving problems, when in fact they're digging themselves deeper. they'll never learn. lol.

haha thank you! i was so, so, so nervous about the last half of this chapter. i don't think i'm so great at writing the sex scenes, so i'm definitely glad to hear you enjoyed it!

thanks for reading and reviewing lady!




xKiKix (Anonymous) on Mar 19, 2009 11:31 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
OOOHHH!! chelsea and trace???? i kinda knew it all along... lol.. but damn maddie and justin are getting hotter than ever!! please update more soon...

Author's Response:

lol. i thought it was kinda obvious myself. and i'll be honest, it wasn't actually part of my original idea. it just sort of developed and i decided to run with it. lol. i don't know why, but i love, love, love when plotlines seem to develope as you go along. lol. i'm weird like that.

thanks for reading and reviewing lady. i promise, more soon! lol




mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 10:54 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
funny chapter, I kinda expected this to happen but it wont last. I just hope Justin doesnt do anything stupid...

Author's Response:

lol well.... he does have the tendency to do some pretty stupid stuff...so, who knows. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 09:39 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
Ok...I don't think I've said this before but I'm saying it now...I EFFIN LOVE YOU!!!

This little twist was awesome! Her soon to be ex-husband/boyfriend is quite possibly the most lethal thing on this earth..no joke!!!

Regardless, awesome update! Can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response:

lol. i effin love you too jamie! haha.

haha, ain't he though? she's crazy for holding out for so freakin long. lol.

thank ya my dear. i just started the next chapter this afternoon, so hopefully soon!




MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 06:44 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
Finally. Finally, finally, finally, finally. FINALLY! I don't think they need to sneak around. What the worst that Trace and Chelsea would do? They wouldn't give a damn. lol. Plesae update soon.

Author's Response:

lol. yeah... they definitely aren't giving their friends enough credit.

it's coming soon, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing lady! you know i appreciate it a TON!




Shufflee (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 06:38 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
I can never figure them out. 

Author's Response:

lol. they can't even figure each other out, so you're not alone.

thanks for reading and reviewing!




isis (Anonymous) on Mar 19, 2009 06:38 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)

yay finally!!!cant wait for the next one!!



Author's Response:

lol, took em long enough, eh? haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing!




MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 19, 2009 06:33 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
Good chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol i've already started the next one. so hopefully soon!



Meaghan (Anonymous) on Mar 19, 2009 05:58 am (Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying)
LOVE THIS STORY!! Can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: haha thank you! i appreciate that a ton!



MochaB (Signed) on Mar 17, 2009 11:04 pm (Chapter 19: Turning It Around)
Eeeeeek!!! Haha. Ok, so justin is still stupid for even doing what he did, but at least he realizes it was a bad way to get over things and that he never told her how he feels. Man, I'm good! Haha. Jk. But although she's kissing him back will she even want him? Or agree without wanting more time to think? Cause I mean...he was a whore and she heard all about it. Plus their history...I'd be wary even if I did love him. But it was great to hear his side. And he really needs to take control of his own life and I hope this is the beginning of doing so. And him and those JC thoughts...I just think he's wrong. Haha. Ok, update soon! I can't wait to see how their convo plays out. :o)

Author's Response:

lol... who knows. all shall be revealed soon! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!




Tanya (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2009 10:20 pm (Chapter 19: Turning It Around)
GAaahjhhhh are you kidding me!!!!!!!!!! i think its time to update!!



AnotherSong24 (Signed) on Mar 17, 2009 02:15 pm (Chapter 19: Turning It Around)

I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story last night! it's so good... the chemistry between Madison and Justin just oozes off the screen!

Update soon!!



Author's Response:

awww thank you! i appreciate that a ton! glad you decided to read, especially since it's a pretty good ways in now. lol.

anywho... thanks for the review! hope the rest doesn't disappoint!




Ally (Signed) on Mar 16, 2009 04:09 pm (Chapter 19: Turning It Around)

i. need. more. now.

 

Kthanx



Author's Response: lol it's coming, i promise!



Ally (Signed) on Mar 15, 2009 09:08 pm (Chapter 12: Back To The Beginning)

gah!  assHOLE!  He's just feeling guilty about having feelings for a girl JC likes.  little fucker better get over it cuz FFS if JC was really his friend and hers, hed get the fuck outa the way. 

at least thats how its supposed to work.  



Author's Response:

lol! so true! justin just can't handle the truth, and jc is just oblivious to everything.

lol, thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it bunches!




Ally (Signed) on Mar 15, 2009 08:30 pm (Chapter 8: It's Christmas)
the interaction between them is giving me butterflies.  I seriously love it.  I love reading stories that play out like a movie in my head.  I swear there should just be a production company to turn fanfic into film sometimes.  I'm rambling- so im gonna go back to readin.

Author's Response:

lol i'm so with you there! i love, love, love being able to actually picture what's going on in my head, and i try my best to write that way. i like to leave some stuff open to interpretation, but i try to make it as easy to imagine as i can.

lol... we should totally start a production company for fanfic! i bet we'd get plenty of investors! lol.






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