SALEDA SMITH (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2009 10:33 am (Chapter 17)
ARE YOU STILL WRITING THIS STORY OR IS THE STORY DONE BECAUSE IT SAYS THAT THE STORY IS NOT COMPLETED?

Author's Response: Yes, I'm done. I forgot to change it to completed yesterday when I posted the last chapter, but I just fixed it. Sorry about that.


azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 11, 2009 11:14 pm (Chapter 16)
only one chapter left?!  What do you mean there's only one chapter left?? Are you planning a sequel?

Author's Response: Yeah, one chapter left. I don't plan to do a sequel. But I do have another story in the works that I'm currently brainstorming for and that I'll post here once I start writing it.


saleda_smith (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2009 07:22 am (Chapter 16)
GREAT SO FAR!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU BRING LANCE BACK BEFORE THE END OF THE STORY!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm always happy to hear that it's still as enjoyable as it was in the beginning.

Thanks for the review!



saleda_smith (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2009 07:22 am (Chapter 1)
GREAT SO FAR!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU BRING LANCE BACK BEFORE THE END OF THE STORY!!


saleda_smith (Anonymous) on May 20, 2009 07:34 am (Chapter 15)

I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU DECIDE TO BRING LANCE BACK!! THAT WOULD BE SAD IF HE DOESNT COME BACK!!

BUT I AM HAPPY THAT JC DECIDED TO PRESS CHARGES!!



saleda_smith (Anonymous) on May 18, 2009 10:03 am (Chapter 15)
I REALLY HOPE LANCE GETS TO COME BACK!! IT WOULD BE VERY SAD IF HE DOESN'T!!

Author's Response:

I guess you'll just have to keep reading and find out, won't you? ;)

Thanks so much for the review!



me (Anonymous) on May 18, 2009 02:13 am (Chapter 15)

*sniffle* now where is a box of tissues. i remember watching a movie where a girl was raped and the people kept telling her it's not your fault. reading this makes me think of that girl and i love how you made it so real. how ever it is that you got this information i hope it wasn't from personal experience because i could never imagine what that hurt must feel like, :(

great story i keep forgetting im reading a fiction about JC. i feel like this is about any guy or girl that has gone through this and has suffered a great deal with it. i do have suggestion however. as a reader i get kind of winded when i read about the details of what is going on. i know you are trying to set things up but i just want to get to the meat of the story. 



Author's Response:

I love it comes across as real because that was what I was going for. Fortunately, it's not based on personal experience. I just try to really get into my characters' minds and think about how they would react realistically. Not to mention, I try to do research on stuff like this before I start writing.

I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so much! I know that at times I tend to take a little while to get into a scene, and that's definitely been something I've been trying to work on. It's a little late for this story because I'm working on finishing up the last chapter, but I'll definitely keep it in mind for my next one.

Thanks for the review and the suggestion!



azchickadee (Signed) on May 17, 2009 11:05 pm (Chapter 15)

awesome update, as usual!  :)  I'm glad JC decided to press charges.  Yea for Justin saying the right thing and making him change his mind!  :( Boo for Lance leaving. 

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was great writing Justin as the one to convince JC to press charges but in an indirect way. It was nice to finally show Justin acting less like a kid.

Thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon.



ificould (Anonymous) on May 05, 2009 10:46 am (Chapter 14)
wow i really like how you captured real life into this story. although i feel kinda winded about the description of what is going through their heads. i really do love this story though. can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I try to make all of my stories as real and believable as possible. And by winded you mean there's too many thoughts? I guess I can see that, and I am kind of wordy - something that I've been trying to work on.

Thanks for the criticism and the kind words! I appreciate all of it. 



azchickadee (Signed) on May 04, 2009 07:41 pm (Chapter 14)
oh good grief!  the drama continues!  lol...great update.  Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Lol, yes, but things will be settling down soon.

Thanks for the review!



whatever (Anonymous) on Apr 21, 2009 12:41 am (Chapter 13)
yay finally things are starting to happen. ok now i can sleep better knowing this, but watch Lou comes back to hurt JC. if you do that i wil seriously cry.

Author's Response:

Yeah, things are finally coming to light now. As far as Lou hurting JC again, I guess you'll just have to keep reading. ;)

Seriously though, I'm glad that you're enjoying yourself. Thanks for the review!



azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 20, 2009 07:45 pm (Chapter 13)

Initial reactions:

Yes!  Go Chris!!!  It's about time someone puched Lou! 

Awe!  Poor JC!  I just want to give him a hug.  This is going to be so painful for him...



Author's Response:

I had so much fun writing Chris's reaction because it was really deserved, and really Chris was the perfect guy to do it, lol. And yes, JC has it pretty rough. As usual, there will be more drama before I end the story so he's going to have to cope with other stuff.

Thanks for letting me know what you thought about the chapter! I love hearing your comments!



SALEDA SMITH (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2009 04:21 pm (Chapter 13)
I AM VERY HAPPY NOW THAT THE REST OF THE GUYS KNOW ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured that would make a lot of people happy. And I was really excited to write that just to get it out in the open.

Thanks for the excited comment! :)



saleda smith (Anonymous) on Apr 18, 2009 12:42 pm (Chapter 2)
EVERYTHING GOES DOWNHILL FROM HERE!! FIRST TOUCHING, THAN IT LEADS TO OTHER THINGS!!


blank (Anonymous) on Apr 13, 2009 04:44 pm (Chapter 12)
oh for the love of all that is good, Joey tell them. i don't give a crap about what anyone thinks JC needs to be safe. *cries* i want to take a baseball bat to lou *sniffles*. ok update soon please. :D

Author's Response:

Joey is being a little silly, but he has his reasons. I'm sorry that this chapter was so sad, but I'm glad that you like it anyway. I usually update every Monday, so you're just going to have to hold out for a bit.

Thanks for the comments!





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