ificould (Anonymous) on May 05, 2009 10:46 am (Chapter 14)
wow i really like how you captured real life into this story. although i feel kinda winded about the description of what is going through their heads. i really do love this story though. can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I try to make all of my stories as real and believable as possible. And by winded you mean there's too many thoughts? I guess I can see that, and I am kind of wordy - something that I've been trying to work on.

Thanks for the criticism and the kind words! I appreciate all of it. 



azchickadee (Signed) on May 04, 2009 07:41 pm (Chapter 14)
oh good grief!  the drama continues!  lol...great update.  Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Lol, yes, but things will be settling down soon.

Thanks for the review!





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