I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU DECIDE TO BRING LANCE BACK!! THAT WOULD BE SAD IF HE DOESNT COME BACK!!
BUT I AM HAPPY THAT JC DECIDED TO PRESS CHARGES!!
Author's Response:
I guess you'll just have to keep reading and find out, won't you? ;)
Thanks so much for the review!
*sniffle* now where is a box of tissues. i remember watching a movie where a girl was raped and the people kept telling her it's not your fault. reading this makes me think of that girl and i love how you made it so real. how ever it is that you got this information i hope it wasn't from personal experience because i could never imagine what that hurt must feel like, :(
great story i keep forgetting im reading a fiction about JC. i feel like this is about any guy or girl that has gone through this and has suffered a great deal with it. i do have suggestion however. as a reader i get kind of winded when i read about the details of what is going on. i know you are trying to set things up but i just want to get to the meat of the story.
Author's Response:
I love it comes across as real because that was what I was going for. Fortunately, it's not based on personal experience. I just try to really get into my characters' minds and think about how they would react realistically. Not to mention, I try to do research on stuff like this before I start writing.
I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so much! I know that at times I tend to take a little while to get into a scene, and that's definitely been something I've been trying to work on. It's a little late for this story because I'm working on finishing up the last chapter, but I'll definitely keep it in mind for my next one.
Thanks for the review and the suggestion!
awesome update, as usual! :) I'm glad JC decided to press charges. Yea for Justin saying the right thing and making him change his mind! :( Boo for Lance leaving.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was great writing Justin as the one to convince JC to press charges but in an indirect way. It was nice to finally show Justin acting less like a kid.
Thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon.
