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alimera (Signed) on Apr 18, 2009 01:12 pm (Chapter Eighteen)
Whoa, this chapter was intense, but awesome as usual. I agree with Robert, dying would be too easy for Randall. And Rob does need some time away. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah it really was intense. But I'm glad I got it out. School is kinda stalling my flow but there are only two more updates so go so I'll try to get the next one finished to post up for you guys. It should clear up everything else with our characters. Thanks for the feedback. :-)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 13, 2009 12:48 am (Chapter Eighteen)
Damn!! THAT'S A LOT TO DIGEST!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah! It really was! *sigh* Thanks for commenting. I appreicate it. :) I'm working on the next update so I'm hoping to have it up by this weekend for you guys. Thanks again. :)



JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 07, 2009 09:26 pm (Chapter Eighteen)
Wow!! There all kinds of drama in this one!! Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: hehehe yes there are all kinds of drama but it's not the regular drama so I'm glad you find it interesting! :) Thanks so much for letting me know. I'll update again soon.



MochaB (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 09:05 pm (Chapter Eighteen)
whew! man, i'm drained after reading this mess! lol ok, so first i have to say that i still despise randall. i absolutely can not stand him. i don't care that he was scared and that's why he behaved that way, it's completely wrong of him. he's been hurting his sons for so so long. way before he learned of his heart problem (it seems to me if i read things correctly). so what was the reason for that? he's been hurting them then he pulls the biggest stunt of them all. *shakes head* how fitting is it that he has a bad heart? i mean really. not that i wanted him to have a heart attack or anything, but man...karma is something i tell you. that whole thing with nella...i just can't even express how evil that is. i feel like he was suffocating in hate and evilness. and nella...man that girl. i have no words for her either, i'm just like disgusted by randall plotting that whole thing and her agreeing to it. so she's turning over a new leaf? well good for her, but i still don't like her. the only good thing she's done is fess up to this mess. i seriously had my mouth hanging wide open in disbelief as i read this. laughing in shock along the way. he couldn't teach his sons a lesson by you know...actually being a father to them? he had to use his power and wealth and other people to help himself prove a point and teach a lesson? cause he has NO feelings whatsoever! ugh! hmm, i wonder who he's going to turn to if he makes it out of this. i'm guessing the people he's pushed away and out of his life. that's usually how it is. i feel bad for justin and robert. i'm glad that justin has someone like tai to help him through this and be there for support, and i hope maura is the same for robert. well i'm glad it's all out in the open...i'm assuming. you may surprise us with some more stuff. lol great update! i'm so sad that it's almost over though. :o( i want to say update soon, but now i'm not too sure...lol :o)

Author's Response:

Girl, let me tell you...it wasn't easy getting all this craziness out but I'm glad I did. The remaining updates will be easier for me to get through now. I wanted to make sure you all had mostly all the info on our characters to solve their mysteries.  I feel you on the Randall bit. I will say, the final scene that concludes everything to do with him will happen in the next update. So then, when that is over I think everything will be settled with everyone. hmmm...we'll see how it goes. ;-)

And yes, I've grown to love Justin and Tai. hehe. I wanted a different type of drama in this story. I just wanted Justin to have someone there for him, supporting him and all that without all the complicated jazz. I wanted this Jusitn to be different. I know he started out as a jerk but it was for a reason. He wasn't really that person you know? I just wanted everything to not be the same guy/girl relationship chaos. I wanted a change, so I'm glad you all still enjoyed this one. But thanks so much for always taking time out to tell me all what you're thinking. I love how you analyze characters, it's great! I'm glad that you're so into it because I myself get sucked into the worlds I create for my stories.  If I didn't enjoy it so much I wouldn't be doing it. lol. :) Thanks for the feedback! Will try to get the next update out soon.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 04:55 pm (Chapter Eighteen)
I love this and I'm glad that Tia is there for Justin when he needs her the most. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Yup I agree Justin definitely needs Tai and she's been his strength through everything with his dad and family. :) I'm glad you like this one. I definitely wanted a change from the regular guy and girl relationship drama. I mean, there was drama, but it was a different kind, not centered around Justin and Tai and the usual love, hate argument thing. LOL. Thanks for commenting! :)



Jbear (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 12:42 pm (Chapter Eighteen)
That was deep. I knew Randell and Nella were up to something. Was it really worth it to go through all that? I tell ya! That was such a great chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah it was...*sigh* I'm glad I got them to this point despite what happened to Randall. All the secrets and lies needed to come out yes? Well Nella finally realized that it wasn't worth it but obviously she was way too late. We'll see how they all deal after that big change. Thanks so much for liking and letting me know. I'll try to update again soon.



Keediluv (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 12:24 pm (Chapter Eighteen)

OMG SON!!!  That shit was HEAVY MAN!!!  First Nella's crazy antics, then Robert trying to kill his dad and Randall's secret heart condition?!  This is just too much!  I don't know how I feel about Randall maybe not making it...I guess I feel like Tai on this one.  He really doesn't give anyone a reason to care.  I feel for Justin and Robert though so for their sake, I hope he pulls through.  If only for them to make peace before he dies.  Awesome, totally unexpected update!

Ki



Author's Response: Aw yeah, I've been deleting and re-writing this update trying to get everything out there and solved so everyone is finally able to understand what was really going on. I'm glad I finally completed it. The remaining updates should conclude everything. Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting girl I appreicate knowing what you guys think. I agree, there isn't much about Randall that needs saving but at least Tai sees how important Justin and Rob's dad is still to them despite everything. Thanks! :)



MissTasha (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 11:33 am (Chapter Eighteen)
imkindagladsortathathealmostmaybedied. *is ashamed* Please update soon.

Author's Response: awww....I know there isn't much to like but you can't help feel sorry for him now huh? thanks for commenting. Will update again as soon as I can. :)





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