Comments For Stole My Cool
Jazmyn (Signed) on Dec 01, 2010 04:46 pm (We Met On a Rainy Evening in the Summertime)
You're becoming one of my favorites!



camshazam (Signed) on Sep 29, 2010 02:05 pm (Sip It Slow, 'Cause It's So Nice)
lol@ "fuck the fucking shit out of you."  awesome.  love the real world pull-in of JT not being the tech guy. 



camshazam (Signed) on Sep 29, 2010 12:31 pm (We Met On a Rainy Evening in the Summertime)
As an...ahem...more mature admirer of JT's I LIKES this story.  Love the age gap and as a person who also likes younger men, their egos are beyond anything ...yeah.  Just HUGE.  JT and Kerry have good patter too.  Great start, can't wait to see how it comes along.



d_simplicity (Signed) on May 26, 2010 12:14 am (Love On The Rocks)

So i noticed you were featured and realized I never did finish reading this story so i hopped right on it. That was one rollercoaster but in all of it, I can't believe some of the stuff that went down. Justin had his ways, but he was nothing but enduring and patient. I was rooting for him an kerry to work out all through this, that she would see the light and get over this age crap. 

But on the last two or so chaps, when she did Justin like that, I had an instant dislike for her. And you know what? I agree with Justin. She deserved all the unhappiness because she called it on herself with that asshole Nate. But to see that he was actually right at the end, yeah, serves her right. It's kind of bittersweet. She really was a 'bitch' with the way she behaved and was the most immature insecure woman ever even if she was older and she got what she deserved so I'm perfectly fine witht this ending. She made her bed and had to lay in it. I just wish Justin had a happier ending but at least he had Jessica there and she said he was getting better so that was good. Ask for kerry, good ridden. lol. 

I'd love a sequel but I'm perfectly fine with how this story turned out. it was realistic and to have a sequel would mean Jusitn having to put up with her and after what she did to him, I'd not be looking for him to have her in his life anymore either. lol. Amazing story mam. Loved it to pieces!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2010 10:07 pm (Love On The Rocks)
I remember reading in one previous chapter when Kerry told Justin not to fuck her over LMAO well now you're eating your words and got what you deserved. Great story, Ash! and yes sequel please



MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 07:35 pm (Love On The Rocks)
Justice has been served. Burn, bitch! Let it buuuuuuuuurn! *sizzle sound effect* She got what she deserved. Well, really, she derserved to DIAF but this good enough. *happy dance* Awesome story, lady! Sequel, please!



princess (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2010 01:19 pm (Love On The Rocks)
wow... um .... that's it.  She stays miserable huh?  Well that is kinda nice.  (she is a fictional character so I can wish bad things on her lol).  Only thing I would have liked is something showing Justin truly happy again.  Completely back together after she had broken him.  Not with Jessica, although I think she's cool.  Overall though this was an excellent story and you are an awesome Jedi fanfiction master.



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2010 11:30 am (Love On The Rocks)

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Well, nice knowing you, Kerry. :waves Wish I could say it was pleasure but, you're an idiot and I agree with Justin that this bitch deserves to be unhappy for eternity. LOL... No, I'm only half kidding. I was feeling sympathetic, until the phone call when I was thinking of all the things she SHOULD'VE told Nate, none of which she actually said. But, I guess I can imagine her perspective: trying to hard to find and capture the good in the person you love, even though you know deep down that they're toxic. Especially given all her other insecurities with the relationship with Justin, her decisions made some sense, but damn, look where they got her! =

Also, this quote really got me: "I mean, I know I’m not perfect. I don’t always say the right thing or wear the clothes I should. I’m not educated, though I consider myself pretty intelligent and worldly, and I don’t know everything about anything, though I make an effort to know a little something about everything. I try. I deem myself a good man. I work hard, I’m honest, I’m ambitious. At this juncture in my life, I feel like I’m pretty much who I’m supposed to be." Made me think of "Another Song" and then I got all choked up... haha. *hugs Justin*

Sigh, Ash, you did a great job with this, and I did love the story, even though the ending frankly gutted me. Not gonna lie. lol. <3

 




Quincyluv (Signed) on Feb 17, 2010 05:47 pm (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
oh.my.god



just a girl (Signed) on Feb 17, 2010 11:52 am (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
wow.

if kerry could roll off a big cliff in the next chap. that would be great thanks



Jessicalli (Signed) on Feb 16, 2010 04:22 pm (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
O M G! I was not expecting that OMG! I feel so bad for Justin. I can't believe she went and got married (I had to go back and re read that part a few times) while he was gone. What a terrible thing to do to a person! =( I don't know what to say, I'm totally in shock right now. I hope Justin finds someone that will love him no matter what his age is. Wow. Amazing work, please update soon!!!!



princess (Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2010 03:34 pm (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
why do you always do this to us?  You finally helped us out with the last story but it is like you are paying us back for that happily ever after with this bullshit and honestly this maybe the seconde best if not the best justin character that you have had.  Because of that, I hope that this bitch is unhappy because out of all the female characters you have created this one full out deserves it with no fucking sympathy.  Anywho you are an awesome writer.  I hope he finds someone better that he loves and loves him and it isn't Jessica lol. 



MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 16, 2010 05:56 am (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
Kerry can kiss my left butt cheek, my right butt cheek, and my whole asshole. To be that uncaring, selfish, self-centered, and cold is crazy to me. She's a genuinely bad person right now. How the fuck do you get married when you have a boyfriend? I hope Nate fucks every chick that he passes on the street from now on. I hope he cheats on her dumb ass a million times and she goes running back to Justin. Just so he has the oppotunity to reject her, to tell her she blew it, and then say his best advice is that she continue to spend the rest of her life being miserable because that's the best she'll ever be able to do. If he could run her over with a car, that would awesome. Just a suggestion. Please update soon.



sChErZo (Signed) on Feb 16, 2010 02:19 am (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
Damnit girl! I don't know if I'm more shocked or upset...lol. I probably woke up half the house with the loud wtf I basically screamed when I read the last couple lines of this chapter, but oh well! How could this happen? can't wait for the next update



JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2010 01:43 am (Hot As Hell, Cold As Ice)
Well she's an idiot! I really hope she's right and Nate has changed because if not, he just made her look stupid! She really frustrates me! Great update! Can't wait for another one!





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