Comments For You're My Favorite Work of Art
PopDiva (Signed) on Mar 18, 2009 12:19 am (Dinner Disaster: Part 1)
Great start! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I really like the way you use language. "The place always smelled of perfume and chicken. Don’t know if that’s a good or bad thing. I’m indifferent." I can almost smell the perfume and chicken myself. It's an interesting pairing and the passage really seared in my brain.
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2009 05:15 am (Dinner Disaster: Part 1)
I liked it very much please keep writhing. I just wish if the chapters coud be longer for us fiction junkies:)
Author's Response: I wanted to make them longer actually but I thought the chapters needed to be a little spaced out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Author's Response: I wanted to make them longer actually but I thought the chapters needed to be a little spaced out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Joy (Signed) on Mar 17, 2009 02:01 am (Dinner Disaster: Part 1)
I sure hope she's not that young lol but if Kyle is a highschool art teacher I'm going to be really sad. We barely know anything about Lucy and I already want her out of the picture. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: We'll see, I haven't decided what's going to happen with her yet. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: We'll see, I haven't decided what's going to happen with her yet. Thanks for reading!
