Comments For Heaven Can Wait
Molly (Anonymous) on Apr 08, 2009 11:28 pm (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)

This chapter was hot! Hot! Hot!  Justin put it on her! 

I'm a little disturbed by Trace though.  He watched his bestfriend having sex.  Ewwww!  I do like where you're taking this. I haven't read a story where Trace was shown in this kind of light.  It's a nice change. Well I don't know if nice is the word but you get what I mean.  I want the next chapter now! Please.

 



Keediluv (Anonymous) on Apr 07, 2009 05:01 pm (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)
Girl, that was HAWT!!  The sex was anyway.  The arguement came from nowhere and I don't know why Justin's concerned about Jay-Z when he was just all up in Ciara's shit.  Video or not, I know he was just a little turned on right?  Why is Trace all sleazy acting and stuff?  I don't like him being all creepy and deceiving.  First Ciara, now him...I'm going to be on the lookout for real now.  Great update!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the update.  The argument was supose to be a shocker because it happened between to people who love each other very much and just finished having a very intamate moment so I'm glad you got that.  You'll understand the characters a little more as the story goes.  Thank you 4 taking the time to comment chica.


LuLu (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 04:46 pm (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)
On one side I think Justin is being a little paranoid about Beyonce's ex, but then again if she's still talking to him - I'd be a little concerned if my man was still talking to his ex girlfriend of 7 years. I bet if the tables were turned, Beyonce would not be happy if Justin was still talking to Britney or Cameron.

Well well well there's another snake in the grass. Trace! Why do I get this bad feeling that Trace and Ciara are going to team up to TRY and break up Justin and Beyonce? That's ok bc I have faith in Beyonstin. :D

More soon please!

Author's Response:

Who's to says that Mr. Timberlake isn't still talking to one of his ex's if not more than one.  If you haven't noticed parts of their relationship are a little one sided but I'm not sure what I'm gonna do yet so everythings still up in the air.  Just like you I have faith in Beyonstin (lol).

As 4 Trace and Ciara it's still all up in the air.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  I like feedback I can work with so thanks again.



JC Stories (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 12:21 am (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)
Keep up the good work. Im loving it. Update soon

Author's Response: thanks


MissTasha (Signed) on Apr 05, 2009 05:46 pm (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)
I love it so far. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank U!


Shay (Anonymous) on Apr 05, 2009 02:50 pm (Chapter 03 – The Boardroom)
Hot hot hot chapter. Just one thing, women dont have adams apples(atleast thats what i think u were trying to say)

Author's Response:

Lol I 'was meaning to say that area... but thanks lol. I'll change it.

 





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