Comments For Poker Face
Nichole (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2010 05:19 pm (Chapter 16)
I really loved this story from start to finish.  And while I am a little sad the ending didn't turn out quite how I was expecting (more like hoping?) - it seemed fitting.  Great job!

Author's Response:

haha oh yes. just didn't seem right to give this kind of stupidity a happy ending. lol

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! much appreciated!



meggie (Signed) on Jul 15, 2009 06:02 am (Cast)
i thought i had left you a little comment but i guess i dreamed that up or something- either way i know i left you a thing on twitter. giiiiiirl, i know this is what was supposed to happen after all that time passed but damn it, i was hoping for something else.  while i'm glad justin's 'happy'- how happy can you be engaged to a chick carrying his kid that he hasn't even known a year?- i just feel so bad for em!! my heart breaks for her! but i still love you!

Author's Response:

haha... yeaaahh... i had a few different endings in mind, but this one just fit. emma had to suffer some type of consequence for all the bullshit she pulled.

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 11:08 pm (Chapter 15)
damn why does he have to be all good??? I liked it better when she had the dream he cheated..lol. Now I feel so sad for him...

Author's Response:

lol i just couldn't make something that pretty, evil. i'm strange, i know. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2009 10:22 pm (Chapter 16)
well. I...um...yeah, I don't know how I feel about this. I am kind of speechless and that doesn't happen often. Seriously, ask anyone who knows me - I always have something to say.

Author's Response: lol woman... you are insane. but i love you for it!


MochaB (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 06:25 pm (Chapter 16)
Whoop!! I probably sound like a terrible person, but I'm glad it ended like that cause she treated him like crap for sooo long. Plus it's been a year. Karma is something. There really isn't a need for me to go on. It was a great ending! Haha. Awesome job. :o)

Author's Response:

haha indeed!

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!



Hollie (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 05:06 pm (Chapter 16)

Good for Justin moving on. And sorry, but he's right, her getting pissy with him for not immediately mentioning it when she walked through the door is a little silly.

I like this end a whole lot. It's fitting, it's not the cliche 'he falls into her arms after she humiliated him,' but it's not like Emma's totally unsympathetic either. Have I told you lately you're very good at this whole writing lark?



Author's Response:

haha yeah... i had a few different endings in mind, but this one just seemed to fit the best. as much as i wanted to, i couldn't let emma walk away with a happy ending, just wouldn't have been right.

aww... thank ya lady! i appreciate that a bunch!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 01:29 pm (Chapter 16)

D: it ends~ Oh well. There's Mockingbird, Welcome to the World and We Weren't Crazy to look forward too :3 *pops virtual champagne for completion of story* o/

That aside, although I'm cheering Justin on for having moved on and giving Emma a dose of her own medicine, me feels as though this segment was rushed. I don't know why but it just feels that way. Or maybe it's more due to the disbelief that this story is over XD; Iunno~


Either way it was a great story. Loved reading up on Emma's craziness. She deserved what she got and I can't blame Justin for moving on. Though the baby and engagement seemed too soon but oh well these crazy hollywood types XD; 

Great job dear 8D You have another story tucked under your belt. Hope to read stories that feature characters as crazy as Emma in the future ^_^



Author's Response:

ya know, after i read this, i went back and re-read the last chapter, and you just might be right. some of it is rushed, but in this weird way.. the entire story felt a little rushed to me. but i'm weird and my brain works in strange ways. lol.

haha strangely enough... i came up with something new at work today, so we'll see what happens. i'd like to knock out a couple other things before i do it, so we'll see!

thanks for following all of my craziness and reviewing. i appreciate it a ton!



pebblypoo (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 01:28 pm (Chapter 16)
wow...definitely not how i expected it to turn out, but in a strange way i absolutely loved it.  Good Job!

Author's Response:

haha, glad to hear it!

thanks for reading and reviewing love. i appreciate it!



jep77 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 10:56 am (Chapter 16)
well....wasn't expecting that ending.

Author's Response:

lol... i had a few different ones in mind, but this one just seemed to fit the best.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it!



erika_23 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 02:21 am (Cast)

That's it?

That was sad but i guess she deserved it. Great story though.

 I hope you make a sequel.



lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 12:56 am (Chapter 1)
this narrative is hilarious... i think its great. i am totally on the same level with the protagonist. guys r scum. haha

Author's Response:

haha indeed they are!

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!



lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 12:49 am (Prologue)
haha! wonderful prologue.

Author's Response: lol thank ya hun!


Tanya (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2009 12:24 am (Chapter 16)
NO!!!!! i was praying that by the end it would be some kind of joke he was playing or something like jules or someone tipped him off... damn ok you should totally make a sequel where he comes back later after the babies born or something BLAH I REFUSE TO BELIEVE THIS!!!ok but i loved it.

Author's Response:

lol hmm... i dunno... haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 13, 2009 11:53 pm (Chapter 16)
Wait? That's it? That's the end? :'-(. I don't want it to be the end. But then again, can't say I'm shocked with how things turned out. Emma only has her self to blame. Damn, it's kind of sad, but I loved that this didn't have the typical happy ending. I'm a sucka for those, but this ending was just as good. Justin was a great sport about everything too. Cudos to him. Poor Max. Looks like Em was also the one getting a broken heart in the end. That's what happens when you play poker with people's feelings. Damn. Loved it though! Great stuff! And it was a short and to the point story. :)

Author's Response:

haha yes ma'am.. this is it. i'm a little sad to see it end myself! lol.

you totally got what i was trying to do with this, so that is awesome. i wanted it to be a little different, even though at times i had absolutely no idea where i was going with it, so i'm glad it worked!

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton!



monique32 (Signed) on Jul 13, 2009 11:33 pm (Chapter 16)
ok hate the ending but really he was a pussyhound and would he just do w/out, damn!!!!

Author's Response: lol, thanks for reading and reviewing hun!




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