Comments For Poker Face
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jun 22, 2009 04:53 pm (Chapter 14)

woo! Max has been redeemed! You tricky little minx, you.

alright, Em's starting to get on my shit list a little. You can't have your fucking cake and eat it too, because now she's screwing with two perfectly good, beautiful men. I do not approve. 

If she's bored with Max, stop fucking stringing him along! though I sincerely hope that Justin doesn't make it easy for her. Wouldn't it be great (as I suspect might happen) if she broke up with Max and Justin pulled the same shit with her that she did with him? Basically not giving her the time of day while she has to chase the fuck out of him and actually prove that she's not such a flaky little shit? I would love that. and note to Emma: that is the only way I'll believe idiots deserve to be happy too. 

Love it, as per, my dear. 



Author's Response:

haha, see? i told you your boy would come out unscathed!

lol, emma has landed herself on many a shitlist lately, so i must be doing something right.

ahh... look at you all reading my mind and stuff! i've got a few ideas of how the justin thing will play out, so we'll see. haha... and i've FINALLY figured out the ending of this thing, so it's actually got some direction now.

thank ya love! i do belive you're up now. haha.



MochaB (Signed) on Jun 21, 2009 12:15 am (Chapter 14)
Man I question how big of an idiot she really is. I'd say huge, but maybe I'm just too harsh. Haha. Anyway, you my friend are evil. Lol! Totally thought the last chapter was real. but I forgive you. Haha. This girl has pretty much lead this guy on for a whole year! Why? She needs to put the pride away and be an adult. She wants to be happy, yet she keeps herself from being happy cause she's so stubborn and can't take a chance. Whether justin now gives her a chance or not shouldn't be her deciding factor on if she should stay with max or not. She's not happy now and she won't suddenly be happy if she does stay with him once she gets a rejection from justin so she should just stop it. If I was justin I'd make her work. Lol feeling like I need to reach into fiction land and slap some sense into this girl. Lol hope your allergies clear up or lessen! update soon!! :o)

Author's Response:

haha... nah, HUGE idiot would be a fitting description for her right now.

lol, oh yeah... i'm way evil.. haven't you figured that out by now? haha.

emma is frustrating. that's the nicest way to put it, i suppose. lol. she's got a very backwards sense of wrong and right and it usually screws her in the end. but, she knows she's a screw-up, and that just may end up being her redeeming factor... if she's able to redeem herself at all. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a bunch!

and the allerigies are much better now, thanks! lol.



champ (Signed) on Jun 21, 2009 12:08 am (Chapter 14)
hope you update soon!

Author's Response:

it's coming, i promise! lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 05:06 pm (Chapter 14)
I feel betrayed. lol But, that was a good twist. I'm glad it was only a dream. Still, stupid is as stupid does. *sigh* I don't like Em's character very much right now. Poor Max. And I really do hope that Justin's off the market. Would be good for her to work hard to get him back. I'm hoping she grows some intellegence and common sense soon. Cooper's right. That is all. Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

lol... nah, no betrayl intended. i just couldn't make max evil! lol.

ah yes... emma is quite unlikable at this point. she's pretty self-centered and very mixed up.

haha.. it would be nice to see her doing the chasing, wouldn't it? hmm... we shall see! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton!



tanya (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2009 01:11 pm (Chapter 14)
ahahaha totally need to update and FAST!@@@!!!!!1

Author's Response:

haha, it's coming soon, i promise!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 09:56 am (Chapter 14)

Oh ho...so she switches it up on us and it was only a dream! lol

So, Emma, talk to Justin, confess your feelings and let Max down gently.  All will be well :) right???



Author's Response:

lol, yeah... i'm just evil like that.

hmm... i dunno.. i may have to throw in a bit more drama before that can happen.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!



Hollie (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 09:27 am (Chapter 14)

"I am a stupid, stupid girl."

I could have told her that a year ago (or in reality a few chapters since this is fiction). I have to say though, I really don't dig this idea of her running back to Justin. She's totally messing with both Max and Justin if she does that and it's unfair on both of them.

 

Makes for bloody good reading though.



Author's Response:

indeed. miss emma is very wrapped up in herself and hasn't quite grasped the idea that it isn't just about her anymore, even though cooper tried to drill it into her head. she's stubborn and self centered and complete fuck up... but i've got a soft spot for her anyway. lol.

haha, thank ya my dear! i appreciate that a TON!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 08:21 am (Chapter 14)
Ok after the last chapter, I had pretty much decided not to continue with this story because I just disliked the chapter that much but I was bored so I read this one.......and I'm SO Glad I did...lol. I'm glad it was all a dream, because that last chapter was weird.....now I'm back on track...good.

Author's Response:

well, i'm glad ya decided to read! haha. and i definitely appreciate the honesty!

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 08:02 am (Chapter 14)

Ahhh X____X Why you do this to me? I actually thought that happened TT__TT

You know, as much as I would like to, I'm starting to dislike Emma as a character. She had a chance, she didn't take it. She knew she was attracted to him but refused him out of pride. It's been over a year, and Max is invested in her already and then she has an epiphany that Justin is the one for her. Like Cooper said, it's been a year. She should have come to months ago, but again the pride thing.

Whew~ all that hate for a fictional person XD; Props to you for making her un-May Sue-like and making her human.o/

I hope Justin has a girlfriend. >3 She deserves to actually chase after him for once. As for her happiness, I'll just hold my opinion on that matter to see if she deserves Justin back. *nods sagely*

Good update as always, albeit short. Can't wait for the next one. :) *gives you anti-allergy meds to help with the sickness*



Author's Response:

lol, because i'm evil like that, i just couldn't help myself.

haha yeah... emma is... i guess she's the epitome of every confused, stupid, self-centered, stubborn woman in the world. she's a screw up, and she knows it. but hopefully, she'll find her way back to the good side... who knows! haha.

ah... that was actually my intention with her. i didn't want her to be the typical female lead, i wanted her to be frustrating and stupid and the kind of girl you just want to slap around a bit. so i'm thrilled to hear that's coming across the way i wanted!

haha... she'll be opening a can of worms if she actually takes cooper's advice and goes to see justin... that's all i'm sayin! haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it a ton!

and i'm feeling much, much better... so i should be back to normal soon enough! haha.



meggie (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 04:53 am (Chapter 14)
Too short!! But I'm glad she's admitting she made a mistake. It'll be interesting to see how it goes with justin, if she even goes & talks to him!

Author's Response:

haha yes... that's the interesting thing about emma, i think. she's stupid, and she's a screw up... but she's well aware of those flaws, she just isn't quite sure how to correct them.

and i dunno... maybe she will... maybe she won't... lol

thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a bunch!



xKiKix (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2009 03:39 am (Chapter 14)

lol, yes as each chapter progresses i'm like YES EMMA go to justin!!!! but i totally understand why she wouldnt want to see justin because then she would hurt max and its not good to do that but at the same time she needs to be happy too... hmm... quit a dilemma.. haha

 btw i hope you feel better soon.



Author's Response:

lol, indeed. she's got quite the dilemma on her hands, no matter what she does... somebody will get screwed over. such is the game of life. lol.

thanks for reading and reviewing my dear! i appreciate it a ton!

and i'm finally starting to feel normal again, so thank you!



nikoleoncld9 (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2009 02:35 am (Chapter 14)
I heart you something kind of fierce. Period. End of story. That may be the martini's talking though. ;) Kidding. I really enjoyed them and I like this story more and more...the more and more Max gets fucked over.

Even after watching Star Trek, I still don't see the attraction.

Author's Response:

ah.. woman... i think glow and i are going to have to strap you in a chair and go through the chris pine catalog until you give in. i do believe he's at his best looks wise in star trek... as far as performance... i got a major kick out of him in smokin aces, just because it's so outside of some of the cheesy crap he usually does.

anywho... enough of my fangirl rambling....

oh yes.. dear max is gonna get screwed, that much is certain. lol, won't be fun, but tis necessary!

thanks for reading and reviewing love! ya know i heart ya for it!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 01:24 am (Chapter 14)
I...have been...deceived. Trickery is afoot! I'm been bamboozled! Please update soon.

Author's Response:

haha... that was the intention my dear! you know i love to be dramatic. haha.

thanks for reading and reviewing hun!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jun 20, 2009 12:59 am (Chapter 14)

Ahhhh~ You updated ^____^

Will give a more thorough review for when I actually read through the entire thing~





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