Comments For The Little Things
azchickadee (Signed) on May 07, 2009 07:09 pm (The Little Things)

are you really?  you're really happy with just the little things?  *raises eyebrow suspiciously*  lol...

you could totally continue this...tell me you're going to continue this...it's really good and has the makings of the beginning of a great story!  :)



Author's Response: I will consider making this into a bigger story but I hate to add one more thing to distract me from my other. lol I keep messing with ideas in my head in hopes to start something new but I've thought of a few ways I could take this. We'll see! Stay tuned and thanks for reviewing:)



katethegreat (Signed) on May 07, 2009 02:45 am (The Little Things)

awww... i loved this!

and i really, really liked the fact that it wasn't one of those typical "and here's where we fall in love" type endings. it was pretty interesting to see them as just friends.

and, i love the portrayl of justin in this. he just seemed.... real, if that makes any sense. lol. he isn't portrayed as an asshole or this overly wonderful character, he's just a genuine guy, visiting with his best friend, and it was really cool to see that.

anywho, i'm done rambling. lol. awesome job hun!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending! I was in the mood for something 'not so typical.' I figured everyone could relate with a best guy friend we love but nothing ever comes from it and Justin just fit the part. lol *Sigh* Thanks so much for reviewing :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on May 07, 2009 02:26 am (The Little Things)
That was really sweet and very well written. I also like how it had the bittersweet ending instead of the typical "and-then-he-told-me-he-had-feelings-for-me-too" type of one. Great job and yes, I could most definitely relate to it!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!





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