Comments For A Round of Golf
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jun 06, 2009 06:38 pm (Chapter 1)
I don't really understand this. He cheated, she breaks up with him, neither seems to care, then they fuck? That just doesn't make sense to me, but it was good.
band nerd (Signed) on Jun 06, 2009 11:31 am (Chapter 1)
yeah, I'm not going to attempt to read that. You should probably reformat it into paragraphs, as I'm sure i'm not the only one who is thrown by this.
