Of all the gin joints in all the world…
MUCH MUCH MUCH LOVE to you for mentioning one of my favorite FOB song <3
Ahem. Fan-girling aside...
I like what's happening to this story so far. I don't think it's too fast paced or anything and things happen when and where they should at a point in the narrative. I also like your characterization of Justin. He seems to be written differently (or at least he reads across to me that way) and I find it refereshing. All in all, an interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this :)
Author's Response: FOB got it from Casablanca, lol. But thanks :) Your review is very much appreciated and I'm so glad you're liking it.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you're liking it.
Author's Response: Yeah, he is pretty dense. and he's not going to be very pleased when he puts two and two together. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I did that just for you, lol :) it just seemed to fit.
Author's Response: Thank ya :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're excited, lol. Thanks :) I was hoping people would be receptive to this, and I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying it so far.