Comments For Made of Amethyst.
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 12:01 pm (mario and luigi.)
I like it! Please don't stop! Update soon...
meggie (Signed) on Aug 19, 2009 05:37 pm (mario and luigi.)
oh god....that cant be a good, talking back to the mob?!? dumb move timberlake! but the whole 'sloppy seconds' line, LOVED it!! at little bit of a back handed complement but loved it none the less! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yeah, JT really should've kept his mouth shut, but if he hadn't said anything moi most likely would've, lol. thank you so much for reading!! =) i'm working on the next chapter... hopefully it will b up sometime this weekend, maybe sooner if possible.
Author's Response: yeah, JT really should've kept his mouth shut, but if he hadn't said anything moi most likely would've, lol. thank you so much for reading!! =) i'm working on the next chapter... hopefully it will b up sometime this weekend, maybe sooner if possible.
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 19, 2009 03:10 pm (mario and luigi.)
Moi is crazy! Lol her thoughts crack me up. She'll get going, but then it always leads to sex. Lol she is beyond horny, but I must say that I hope she gets to satisfy her craving soon. Mmhmm. Haha. I can't wait to see how they are going to get out of this cause it definitely just got more real with those guys being up close and personal. Update soon!
Author's Response: hahahahaha! i dont even kno wat to say... yes, moi is way beyond horny but its JT... can u blame her? haha. & yes the time must come soon where her craving is satisfied. as for "mario" and "luigi"... this is surely not the end for them... thanks for reading & reviewing =) i'm going to try really hard to update soon.
Author's Response: hahahahaha! i dont even kno wat to say... yes, moi is way beyond horny but its JT... can u blame her? haha. & yes the time must come soon where her craving is satisfied. as for "mario" and "luigi"... this is surely not the end for them... thanks for reading & reviewing =) i'm going to try really hard to update soon.
glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 19, 2009 12:17 pm (mario and luigi.)
Author's Response: ahahahahaha! everything about this review is just delightful! i guess i'm dysfunctional too because i also found the teasing a little sweet, lol. & i dont kno what happened! i swear this chapter was done a long time ago, i just kept coming up with more & more things to add, & then i got caught up in rehearsal & there was no time to post but i will seriously try to post more asap. thanks for reading!!
God this is some SHIT, dude. Up until the last scene I had a very Bonnie and Clyde feel going on and then it was just all Scorcese, haha. I love that little moment where he's teasing her about liking it rough--pervy, but oddly...sweet?
Yeah, I'm dysfunctional I know. But I demand you not take so long to update next time! I'm an impatient motherfucker, damnit.
Love it, chick, as usual.
Author's Response: ahahahahaha! everything about this review is just delightful! i guess i'm dysfunctional too because i also found the teasing a little sweet, lol. & i dont kno what happened! i swear this chapter was done a long time ago, i just kept coming up with more & more things to add, & then i got caught up in rehearsal & there was no time to post but i will seriously try to post more asap. thanks for reading!!
cagf5000 (Signed) on Aug 19, 2009 06:54 am (mario and luigi.)
I love this story! PMS!!
Author's Response: hahaha. thank you! i will try to post more as soon as possible!
Author's Response: hahaha. thank you! i will try to post more as soon as possible!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 28, 2009 11:39 pm (moi moves in.)
"You're in trouble with... the Sopranos?"
"It's not funny!"
Author's Response: hehe, yes she has. but dont u jus love her for it? w/o her crazy stupidity there would b no story! i have to check out the sopranos... i never got to c an episode when it was on the air. & mean streets... wats that about? i'm glad u liked the joke about the sopranos... it jus seemed appropriate, even i cracked up a lil @ it =D aww... well, pls continue to r&r =) i appreciate it!
Oh bugger, she's gone and gotten herself into some fine shit, eh?
Um, also, having just re-watched Mean Streets and S3 of The Sopranos, I love you for this:
"You're in trouble with... the Sopranos?"
"It's not funny!"
We're eye to eye. "No, it's not funny, but... this is some Mario Puzo, Robert De Niro, Michael Scorsese, scary shit."
Author's Response: hehe, yes she has. but dont u jus love her for it? w/o her crazy stupidity there would b no story! i have to check out the sopranos... i never got to c an episode when it was on the air. & mean streets... wats that about? i'm glad u liked the joke about the sopranos... it jus seemed appropriate, even i cracked up a lil @ it =D aww... well, pls continue to r&r =) i appreciate it!
cagf5000 (Signed) on Jul 28, 2009 10:12 pm (moi moves in.)
OMG! I love this! I lave Fefe Dobson and I think it's cool that you used her. She fits Moi very well! Great concept and even though it moves a little fast i kinda like it! I wish the chapters were a little longer but other than that it ia awesome! PMS<3
Author's Response: yeah, fefe dobson is great! haha, yes the story does move fast... i keep it fast paced bcuz there's just so much crazy stuff i can get moi & justin into, but does it make u feel like there isn't enough character or plot development? well thanks for reading & reviewing... i will try to post more soon.
Author's Response: yeah, fefe dobson is great! haha, yes the story does move fast... i keep it fast paced bcuz there's just so much crazy stuff i can get moi & justin into, but does it make u feel like there isn't enough character or plot development? well thanks for reading & reviewing... i will try to post more soon.
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 28, 2009 08:55 pm (moi moves in.)
Oh goooosh. What has this girl gotten herself into? I can't even understand why she even suggested going to his house. It won't do any good unless they are going to come up with that money together...she may get sex though, which will prob be good soooo...yeah. Maybe she'll get another chance to have sex before they are both taken out. Lol justin better take out a loan! Lol update soon! :o)
Author's Response: lmao! no one knows y moi does and says the things she does, not even moi, but i have to say that u r on to something... i can't clarify what... but u r on to something. thanks for reading!! i'll try not to take longer than 3 days to update again.
Author's Response: lmao! no one knows y moi does and says the things she does, not even moi, but i have to say that u r on to something... i can't clarify what... but u r on to something. thanks for reading!! i'll try not to take longer than 3 days to update again.
meggie (Signed) on Jul 28, 2009 07:10 pm (moi moves in.)
omg! where have i been? i LOVE this! kinda reminds me of glowbugs writing which is AMAZING.....so yea, you are now awesome! lol can't wait for more
Author's Response: lol. wow, thanks! never thought i'd get compared to glowbug, she is TOTALLY amazing! ur a new reviewer... thank you so much for reading! i'm working on the next installment rite now :)
Author's Response: lol. wow, thanks! never thought i'd get compared to glowbug, she is TOTALLY amazing! ur a new reviewer... thank you so much for reading! i'm working on the next installment rite now :)
cindy (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2009 10:42 pm (ember meets justin.)
Loves it! Keep 'em coming girl!
Author's Response: haha. thnks! i'm working on the next installment rite now =)
Author's Response: haha. thnks! i'm working on the next installment rite now =)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 16, 2009 03:35 pm (ember meets justin.)
Wow....Emb is kinda gonna kill her when she finds out the real story!
Author's Response: hahahaha. i kno!
Author's Response: hahahaha. i kno!
Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jul 16, 2009 10:24 am (ember meets justin.)
Hmmm, I have a feeling something is going to happen between the two of them. :) Update soon!!!! PLEASE!
Author's Response: working on the next installment now! thanks for reading!!
Author's Response: working on the next installment now! thanks for reading!!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 16, 2009 09:28 am (ember meets justin.)
Author's Response: haha, i'm glad u find humor in this. sometimes when i'm writing i tell myself "hey, that was kinda funny..." but then i think no one else will pick up on it bcuz it is dry. i'm so happy that u like this... thank you so much! for reading, for reviewing, for everything =)
Have I mentioned that I love this? Cause I do.
Her inner monologue is just fantastic. It has this sort of...staccato rhythm to it which is interesting to read. Also the humor is so dry and it cracks me up.
Author's Response: haha, i'm glad u find humor in this. sometimes when i'm writing i tell myself "hey, that was kinda funny..." but then i think no one else will pick up on it bcuz it is dry. i'm so happy that u like this... thank you so much! for reading, for reviewing, for everything =)
glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 06:00 pm (face to face with justin.)
Author's Response: actually no, i havent read a palahniuk book yet but i always told myself i'd check out 'choke.' a friend of mine was telling me how weird, but good it is. i saw fight club tho & i loved the narrative. thank u so much for comparing my storytelling to him... that means a lot to me... the fact that u took the time to review means a lot to me. u dont kno how much i enjoy ur stories... sometimes i get rly impatient when i read & i skip around, but i sat there & read 'all in the timing' all the way thru in like 20 mins, haha. thnx so much for reading =)
Where have I been? I fucking love this! You wouldn't happen to be a Palahniuk fan, by chance, would you? Because your storytelling style is very reminiscent of him, in the best possible way.
have no idea where you're headed with this but can't wait to read more. definitely got my interest, lady!
Author's Response: actually no, i havent read a palahniuk book yet but i always told myself i'd check out 'choke.' a friend of mine was telling me how weird, but good it is. i saw fight club tho & i loved the narrative. thank u so much for comparing my storytelling to him... that means a lot to me... the fact that u took the time to review means a lot to me. u dont kno how much i enjoy ur stories... sometimes i get rly impatient when i read & i skip around, but i sat there & read 'all in the timing' all the way thru in like 20 mins, haha. thnx so much for reading =)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 04:20 pm (face to face with justin.)
Author's Response: i dont wanna say too much & give things away but ur on to sumthin... thanks so much for coming back to read more =)
Interesting. She might be growing an attraction to him...but that could be her fear and lack of a sex life
Author's Response: i dont wanna say too much & give things away but ur on to sumthin... thanks so much for coming back to read more =)
