Comments For Outside Looking In
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2009 02:33 pm (Chapter 8)
YAY!!! WOOOO!!! THEY HAVE A SORTA DATE THING!!!!


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 21, 2009 05:07 pm (Chapter 7)
Wooo! YAY!!


Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jul 21, 2009 03:37 am (Chapter 6)
awww. that was cute :) I have a feeling something is going to happen soon. Well, I thought that on the other chapters too, but I really think something is gonna happen.  Update soon!


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 12:23 am (Chapter 6)
Awww! I love them together!


MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 19, 2009 09:06 pm (Chapter 6)
Like it. Please update soon.


Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jul 18, 2009 01:37 am (Chapter 5)
Oooooo....this is getting good. lol update soon :)


MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 05:56 pm (Chapter 5)
Good stuff. Please update soon.


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 16, 2009 09:33 pm (Author's Note.)

Cool!

 



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jul 16, 2009 01:30 am (Chapter 3)
I'm really liking this story. lol Please update soon :)


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 15, 2009 06:16 pm (Chapter 3)
Wooooo!! Yay! They get to meet!


MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 15, 2009 02:30 pm (Chapter 2)

all I have to say is where is chapt. 3 :p

update soon :D



monique32 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 10:13 pm (Chapter 2)
cute, I like it, update more often and make them much l,onger thankyou.lol


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 09:38 pm (Chapter 2)
wow...men!


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 04:16 pm (Chapter 1)
This is good..I like it so far!

Author's Response: thanks, sweetie! :)


Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 10:12 am (Chapter 1)
Interesting. This story could go so many ways. Please update soon :)

Author's Response: thankss!




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