MochaB (Signed) on Oct 02, 2009 01:38 am (
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Girl ain't that the truth! Remember that when you get caught! Haha. But I mean...obviously justin and trace are doing something bad here so when they get caught what's going to happen there? I can't wait to find out exactly what they are doing. Molly...there is more to her than what has been said. How would she know to keep an eye out on trace and the restaurant? I'm sure she has sources and stuff, but there is something else there. And why would she even tell them to do so? She really is in deep. It just sucks cause I don't doubt she's a good person. She just letting her job turn her into something she's not. I know I always say that, but it's true and sucks big time. Good for her for not running the story. Now megan has the pics of them smoking weed, but would that really be news shock worthy? Doesn't seem like it to me. But ohmygosh if this chapter didn't remind me of Frankie's sexy self. *drools* lol update soon!
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 09:48 pm (
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This gives me a Kate Major feel. Poor Abby 8< I hope she's not going to be made to play the crazy, scorned woman *u* I'd hate to hate Film!JT now.
Author's Response: haha.... showing my air-headedness but, i have no idea who kate major is. lol.
hmm... nah... no crazy, scorened women. i promise! haha.
thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!
Jbear (Signed) on Sep 29, 2009 12:15 pm (
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Really? Are they really stealling money from the resturant? Ok yea Justin is seriously in trouble and lets not even get on Abby who is beyond in over her head!
Author's Response: ummm.... haha.
oh yes... wayyy in over her head. lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it!
-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 07:21 pm (
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mmhmm, i wonder why she's in too deep? its fucking JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE!!
Author's Response: haha ain't that the truth! lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
meggie (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 05:23 pm (
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"She doesn't...fuck...she just isn't you."
Part of me wishes you left it at 'she doesn't fuck' LOL i dont know why but that line totally made me giggle! i love that he's a cheating bastard in this. don't ask me why cause it's all sorts of bad but i LOVE it.
i have a feeling trace is up to no good and it hurts my heart because i do love him. he's my favorite.
i don't think abby understands what 'in too deep' means. but damn if i don't love her too.
Author's Response: lmao... ah, bad choice of words on my part. haha.
gah i know... i adore writing trace in all his sarcastic glory, so making him all shady and suspicious just hurts my heart. lol, but it had to be done!
thank ya lady! i appreciate it!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 28, 2009 04:45 pm (
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This is going to be one big mess when Justin finds out what she does for a living! DRAMA!! Now feelings are involved and they can't seem to deny each other even though Justin is with someone else. I don't think I'd be able to deny him either! Great update! Keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: haha you and me both dude!
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 03:00 pm (
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gee, i wonder where you got the idea to make everyone stoney magoo? ;)
i love trace, even when he's stoned and stupid.
justin's apathy for his girlfriend doesn't bode well for abby but she's not thinking clearly either, is she?
everybody's doing all this shady ass shit and i want to be sympathetic with someone but they're all kind of being assholes one way or another, haha.
love it, as per!
Author's Response: psh... i assure you... i have no clue what you're talking about. haha.
well yeah, how do you not love trace? he's pretty much my favorite, ever.
haha ohh yes... all very shady. guess i have to clear that up? or not. lol.
thank ya my dear! mucho appreciated!
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 02:19 pm (
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I'm intrigued by the mystery and kind of unimpressed with Justin's douche-y behaviour. He'd better regret that when he sobers up or I am officially labellign him a jerk.
Author's Response: hmm... the jerk label might not be too far off, but we shall see! haha.
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 28, 2009 06:50 am (
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Well, damn. He's stealing employees' tips? If he is, I hope she tells the whole world about it. Bitch is going down. Please update soon.
Author's Response: uhh... no? haha. we shall see! lol.
thank ya lady! i appreciate it!
