Comments For Up Against the Wall
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 17, 2011 01:12 am (What's so Special about Birthdays Anyway?)
Oh my gosh, this chapter was so sweet. The guys totally went all out for Mack's birthday party, they are like the greatest friends ever, not every ordinary friends would do that! Aww, and they got her a puppy, how sweet, that's probably like one of the greatest gitfs you can ever get a person! And what the hell? Mack's parents didn't even come to her own birthday party? How sad, I hope nothing bad happened! I love this story, I love each chapter I read, and I can't wait to read the next one!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 11, 2009 07:44 am (What's so Special about Birthdays Anyway?)
Aww, the guys are so sweet for singing that song. And how can her parents just forget her birthday like that?
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Sep 04, 2009 08:03 am (What's so Special about Birthdays Anyway?)
Author's Response: I'm still working on taking out unnecessary details, but I'm not very good at catching it. I hope you still enjoy reading this story. We don't talk much anymore. Dang yo stupid job, lol.
I really like how your writing style is improving :) I can totally imagine this happening as a television series. That said, you could tighten it up further by deleting unnecessary details in the narrative. But all in all, good job :)
I will poke thee on email. I never seem to catch you online anymore ;__;
Author's Response: I'm still working on taking out unnecessary details, but I'm not very good at catching it. I hope you still enjoy reading this story. We don't talk much anymore. Dang yo stupid job, lol.
