Wow, there is so much to say about this chapter! First off let me start by saying that this is another one of my favorite chapter so far! It so sad when Lance has to leave, but I'm so glad he comes back. I was sad for Mack when left because that was like her only sane friend in the house, I was thinking like "Oh my god, how is she going to manage!" It seems like it would be really hectic living with all of those guys, but really fun at the same time! Wish it were me! That Sweatshirt slap game seems like a lot of fun! Now, on to the action; Lou Pearlman is a total creep (alright, it's not like I didn't already know that, but still...) OMG I can't believe that he actually wants to have sex with a 14 year old. If I were in Mack's position, I would feel sick too. BUt it's sad because, maybe Mack feels like she can't tell anyone because it would ruin the guys chance at making it big, and that sucks. And wanting to kick lance out of the group and change their name is so not cool (okay, so it's not like I didn't know this either, but still...). And lastly the sweetest part of this chapter is when JC and Lance take care of a sick Mack. I really like how Mack and JC's relationship has blossomed, they used to fight all the time, and now JC's really protective of her, it's cute!

Lou is a creeper!! When is she going to say something to someone?! Loved it and hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: Of course he's a creeper. There IS a reason why he wears those dark glasses all of the time, lol. Thanks for the review.