Comments For Up Against the Wall
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 23, 2011 03:50 pm (The First Cut is the Deepest)
What does Charlotte mean? Don't talk to me like that? Is she for real, because it's not exactly like she deserves her daughter's respect. She abandoned her! I can't believe that she doesn't acknowledge the fact that her daughter is in emotional pain, when she tells her mom that she needs her. She's going through a lot, and she needs her mother. Her mother is being selfish. And cutting? Really? I hate the fact that she's dealing with her pain by cutting. That's so horrible, I wish I could just give her a big hug.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Mar 23, 2010 01:53 am (The First Cut is the Deepest)
Uh oh! Not good! The boys are finally the boys are sensing something is wrong. Boys are so dense sometimes. Great update!

Author's Response: Yes, the boys have finally gotten their brains in their heads. Boys ARE dense sometimes but also when they're dense it calls for great entertainment, lol. Thanks for the review, the next chapter should be up soon.



wipeout22 (Signed) on Mar 22, 2010 03:31 pm (The First Cut is the Deepest)

WOW!!! This chapter is intense!!! Glad that Joey explained to her that they are friends and she has someone to lean on (aaaawwww). AAARRGH I can't stand her mother. Mack needs her and what does she say your father can take care whatever you need!!!!! Gosh she erks me. Someone needs to teach that woman a lesson. Oh uh Mack is staring to cut herself (so much drama). Wonder how the guys will react on this. Im guessing it ain't going to be pretty.

Great Chapter!!!!Next Chapter please!!!!!I want to know what happens next!     



Author's Response: Yes, the chapter was intense, but intense in a good way I hope. Joey's such a sweetheart like that. I was goig to draw out her stubborness on that subject a little longer but the little Mack in my head told me not to. (Haha, that sounds really funny). Her mother really bothers me too but as I said her reasons will be revealed in due time. I'll upload the next chapter soon! Thanks for the review.



sexylove91 (Signed) on Mar 21, 2010 01:59 am (The First Cut is the Deepest)

well the divorce was not a suprise as much time her mom spends "working" and how she just left them, what kind of mother is that? and i so wanna give mack a big huge hug :( but ill leave it up to some else ;)



Author's Response: I figured the divorce wouldn't be much of a surprise so i decided to just stick it in. and i know, she's a crappy mother, but she has her reasons which will be revealed later. haha, yes she really needs a hug.



NSYNCilicous85 (Signed) on Mar 21, 2010 01:44 am (The First Cut is the Deepest)
wow this chapter was seriously intense!! i love it...hurry with more :-)

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. Hang on tight, lol



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 20, 2010 08:24 pm (The First Cut is the Deepest)

*GASP* Mack's parents are getting a divorce..well of course..cause Mack's mom is never there for her..Go Mack..tell ur mom like it is! :) & oh nooo..she started cutting herself...eventually the guyz might see that pretty soon...Good chapter girl!

 Thanks for updating! :)




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 20, 2010 03:25 pm (The First Cut is the Deepest)
Oh no! She's a cutter now? Gosh, so many things are happening to her I just want to give her a hug. And her mother...I don't know what to say. I just hope she tells one of them something soon or else she's going to explode from keeping everything inside.





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