Comments For Up Against the Wall
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 23, 2011 04:27 pm (A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 1)
Awww, Lynn leaving almost made me want to cry. That was so sad. Road trip! Woohoo! Wow, a six hours stuck in a car with five boys? Oh boy!



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 11:03 am (A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 1)

omg! attack of the pillows? ah! shower scene -- ah! road trip -- triple AH!

hehe...i knew the sequel title before everybody else! yayerz! loved it chica...



Author's Response: hahaha, hopefully i'm not giving you a heart attack. and yes, you're the special lady who knew the sequel title before the others. thanks for the review.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2010 10:01 pm (A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 1)

Woo hoo! Road trip! Oh how awesome it would be, to be in a car with them! Im soo in! lolz I liked the part when JC was writing in his "Thoughts Journal" I find that sweet..& also when he was thinking abt his then gf Nikki?? Hmm.. ;P

Anyway..thanks for updating! :)



Author's Response: The thought journal, might be the only way to get into JC's head unfortunately. =/ ah well, i do what the voices in my head tell me so I can't complain. Road Trip, next chapter. Thanks for the review.



Anonymous (Signed) on Jun 22, 2010 08:34 pm (A Plane, No Train, and An Automobile Part 1)

What can I say about this chapter. The begining was amazing. I loved how you described their sleeping habits. (Joey snoring like a truck, hahaha!) And JC wants to get back together with Nikki? Or not? Hmmm. I like the insight into his thinking. Oh I hope he figures out what's going on with Mack soon.

Aww, Lynn leaving. That scene was so sweet. Justin trying not to cry and acting all macho. And Lynn making sure that Justin and Mack understood that they would need each other now more than ever made me tear up, I'm not kidding. I loved how JC was the one who helped them walk away. I want a "big brother" like him. And the roadtrip idea? Sounds good but something tells me that they're going to be mad at each other by the end of it. And...TWO CHAPTERS LEFT? NOOOOOOO! Well, I can look forward to the sequel.



Author's Response: Yes, the sleeping habits. I needed to write something that fit their personalities and I always imagined Joey the snorer. Does he? I left some hints in the chapter that tells what his response will be. Mack's a very complex person, her secret will come out when the timing is right. And yes, sappy Justin made me tear up a bit. JC, the big brother. *Le sigh* thanks for the review.





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