DOO RUN RUN!! YAYYY! When Justin says "the light is OOH! all in my face" always makes me laugh! I might have to go watch that now, lolz Let me see....my fave part is JC's adoption section..Im SOO glad u put that there, it was really heartwarming & deep *tear.. I also like when Johnny gave her the CD from Nick, & Chris making jokes! lolz & is Mack goin back to Memphis?? because her mother is not feeling well?? OOooohh... O_O & hooray for an upcoming sequel! Woot!
Good job girl! Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I loved the Justin light line. His accent always makes me smile. yes, you ahve to go watch it. I had to put JC's adoption in there. It suddenly came to me that he was adopted and my voices wanted me to write about that instead of the way Mack was feeling about her parents' divorce. Yes, Chris is too too funny. IS her mother feeling well? i don't know yet, you'll know next chapter, though. Thanks for the review, it means a lot.
'golly'? d'oh! all he needs now is to add 'gee whiz' to it....he's so dorky! i absolutely love roadtrips! i love that u finally made him vulnerable. he cant always be strong, and thats def a lesson JC can teach Mack & vice versa!
i love it! more! more!
Author's Response: that's JC for ya, he's adorkable! JC vulnerable...the voices in my head wanted Mack to see that the strongest (in this case JC) can also be vulnerable, which will be important in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Ok, FINALLY! SOmeone talks to Mack about what's been going on. I'm glad it's JC and I'm glad he wouldn't take silence for an answer. Threatening to keep her locked in the car, smart plan. (I'd want to stay locked in a car with JC, XD). Anyway, WOW. That whole JC adoption thing...I'm speechless and crying. It's just...you made him sound vulnerable and that was so sweet. And how he wants to help her and how they're proud of her...awwwww....
DOO RUN RUN! YES! I'm glad you added that in, that was so funny. It makes me want to watch the videos again. Adding Mack in for a few bits was a good idea. And I think Johnny's hinting at something when he's talking about Nick. They seem pretty good together, but it seems that their friendship has an underlying meaning. And Chris with the sign. OMG, how he spelled traitor wrong. And, awww, Trace, begging her to come back home. That was sweet. I still can't believe it's two mroe chapters, but I can't wait to see how this ends and the other begins. I can this and SLY ending and begining with a bang!
Author's Response: JC, the big brother, you gotta love him. Who wouldn't want to be locked in a car with him? Ahh, yes the adoption thing, made me tear up a bit. Doo Run Run, i had to add that. I was thinking about what to do to have them pass time and then I remembered the masterpice called the Reel Nsync. I'm glad you liked the chapter and are looking forward to SLY. Thanks for the review.
