Comments For Up Against the Wall
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 24, 2011 01:52 am (Summer of Changes)
Wow! I have to say, that I really really liked this story, my favorite so far! I can't wait to read Something Like You! You are such an amazing writer!


jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 08, 2010 02:56 pm (Summer of Changes)

i think this has to be one for the most rollercoaster-like story I've read in a while. But, it imitates life down to a T. Especially for such a young girl.

I loved it. Congratulations on finishing -- bring on the sequel! #Squee

Of course they were going to pass their exams, but a little bit of drama never harmed anyone. Well, except maybe Chris's mental state. I mean he did count the hallways' tiles...lol. fave quote: "I'm young, I'll bounce back"

Guess his nickname "Bounce" just took on a new meaning. But, I loved it! yay!



Author's Response: Rollercoasters are fun, so that's good right? Right. The sequel is coming at you soon, don't worry. Hey, Bounce, i just got that! haha, very intuitive. Thanks for sticking with me!


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2010 09:20 pm (Summer of Changes)

Girl! Where do I begin?? Let me see...1st off..I would like to say that was a GREAT ending for this story...Im soo glad that Mack & Justin got BOTH passing grades! & its AWESOME that Mack has soo many opportunities, & the guys are all supportive of it...I love the moments when all four guys were waiting for Mack & Justin to finish the exam...& lolz Chris counting the tiles! Best line “Long enough for me to find out that there are exactly 2,962 tiles in this one hallway alone,”  LMAOOO Chris! U g2 love him.. :D

I also like when JC told Nikki straightforward without being hurtful that they couldnt continue their relationship, & that Nikki understood, & that they can remain frdz..thats a good thing.. :) & the same goes with Justin & Veronica.. Another good line "Im young, I'll bounce back" Typical Justin..lolz

Anyway..I really enjoyed EVERYTHING in this story, Im talking abt since the very beginning..it had frdship, betrayal, fear, support, laughter, suspense, & soo much more..EXCELLENT JOB Girl! U are a great writer..Keep up the good work! :D *hugs*

 



Author's Response: Thank you! I was afraid about the ending but I'm glad you liked it. Well, if Mack didn't pass she'd be in a very pissy mood now wouldn't she? Haha. Ahh, yes i had to add in Chris's mentality in there. I would've counted the tiles if I were him. The breakup, i didn't have that planned that way at first but it felt right to me so i kept going with it. Thanks for the praise, it means a lot to me. The sequel should be up today.


Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2010 08:02 am (Summer of Changes)
Absolutely AMAZING finish my dear!! I definitely DEFINITELY can't wait for the next series. :-) until then....

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending! I was afraid that it didn't do the story justice. *Whew* The next story should be up today.


Anonymous (Signed) on Jul 07, 2010 06:51 am (Summer of Changes)
I'm glad you showed what happened to the others on their vacation, well JC mainly but either way it was a good touch. “Hey J, I love you and all, but I would appreciate it if you got your ass-less ass out of my face,” That was my favorite line. It made me laugh so hard! JT doesn't have an ass I wondered why JC was jumping around the subject, it wasn't like him but I guess it was because he didn't want to tell Justin that he didn't want to get back together with Nikki. Something about them always guessing that it was Christinia who got the contract made me laugh a bit. So we finally hear her response to her offers, she has a good idea about 'em. And, lol at the guys waiting for them to finish their exam. I loved the ending, it was perfect as if the story could end there but perfect if you wanted to add more, which you will. Overall, I'll admit I was skeptic about this story but you've managed to capture me with how the characters dealt with some of their problems. Kudos to writing about it from the begiing of 'N Sync's career by your interpretation. I can't wait to read the next installment.

Author's Response: Of course I showed their vacation, I couldn't leave them out like that. That line made me laugh so hard while I was writing it so I knew I had to put that in there. I'm glad I was able to mae you change your mind about the story. Your words are forever kept in my heart and my head. The new story should be up today.




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