Comments For Alternative To Love
Tink (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2010 04:03 am (Chapter 16)
REally loving this story and can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you:-) More coming soon.



AmberW (Signed) on Jan 08, 2010 01:47 am (Chapter 16)
You have me hooked...its sad what she's gone through but wow.  That's all I can say.  Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing:-)

Update coming soon!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2010 12:21 am (Chapter 16)
Something really bad needs to happen to Jordan's dad because I really can't stand those smug jerks that think they can get away with anything!! And Justin really needs to control himself because just making things more difficult I would want to choke that sick pervert too!! Grrr...update again soon please!!!

Author's Response: He does make it difficult for himself, but its all instinct and rage at this point, and I can totally understand how it would be impossible to control himself when he thinks about his own daughter.



Joanne (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2010 06:50 pm (Chapter 16)
Please don't make us wait that long again for an update, it was too long.  This is a great story and can't wait to see what will happen.

Author's Response:

Thank you:-)

Hopefully I'll get another chapter up this week




MochaB (Signed) on Jan 07, 2010 05:24 pm (Chapter 16)
man i don't even care that justin is in deep crap. i love him for beating that guy and almost doing it again. that thing is pure scum. beyond scum. but i do not love justin for being so back and forth and even agreeing to the money deal. i know they could go to court, but what that thing did to jordan...that would be enough for justin to win and be let off. i think by justin agreeing to the money is more about his life, but the scum is making it about both justin and jordan, but mostly he's trying to get to jordan obviously. so i think the whole story needs to come out about jordan's past. she's embarrassed by it, but it would be better for her, her daughter's, and justin's future. plus she could be an example for those dealing with the same stuff. also it would show that that thing no longer has control over her, which would be huge. update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

This whole thing hits a little closer to home for Justin now that he has a daughter on its way.  Justin could have gone to court, and he'd at least save his reputation, but he doesn't want to sell out Jordan like that.

And the deeper he falls, the harder it seems for him to crawl back up. But right now he's almost at rock bottom, so it won't be long before the only way is up...:-)




Tina (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2010 02:52 pm (Chapter 16)
Her dad is really an asshole

Author's Response:

He sure is:-(

As bad as they come






You must login (register) to comment.