Comments For Careful
MochaB (Signed) on May 16, 2010 09:57 pm (Chapter 21: Come Undone)
Madison is such a freaking coward. She pisses me off greatly when she lies to herself and everybody around her. Her whole life is a big lie and it's her fault. My gosh you know either way you go somebody is going to be mad so just fess up and stop playing games! Grow up! Ugh. Lucas was a jerk for going through her stuff but I'm glad he did. Maybe him calling her out like this will make her stop lying to herself. Now lying to justin...eh we'll see if she'll stop that. Update soon!

Author's Response:

haha all very good points, but, this is madison, so we shall see. lol.

thank ya my dear! much appreciated!




glowbug917 (Signed) on May 10, 2010 10:50 pm (Chapter 21: Come Undone)

Whatever, I like Lucas. He's brash and sort of an asshole, but aren't they all here? Yes. And I'm glad he called her out on it cause she needed to hear it and obviously her happy little land of denial wasn't doing either of them the least bit of good.

So, sucks for him but he deserves better and she deserves to actually you know, deal with her shit. 

But of course it's Madison and it's you so I don't expect her to get any less stubborn anytime soon.

And the crayon thing you know I thought was fabulous. 

that's all, more now damnit!



Author's Response:

haha thank you! everybody's shitting on the boy and i'm just like, he's not that bad, i swear! haha.

lmfao now why wouldn't she get un-stubborn? you know she's like, the epitome of sensibility.

lmfao as you wish lady!




meggie (Anonymous) on May 10, 2010 06:04 pm (Chapter 21: Come Undone)

peace out lucas. i'm over you. sorry but i am. thank you so very very much for this. i was a very happy girl.

um...yeah. i have no laptop that is why there is no updates. my life sucks ass right now.



Author's Response:

poor, poor lucas. i feel so bad for the dude. he's just so pretty!

how are you surviving, seriously? i don't think i could do it.




Hollie (Signed) on May 10, 2010 03:49 pm (Chapter 21: Come Undone)

Okay, that may be the first time I think Lucas has done something smart. Not that i think he ought to give up his band over it - No Doubt worked it out!!!

 

I'm impatiently awaiting my bus.



Author's Response:

lol now you know you want him out of the picture, just admit it!

you and your bus. i'll never hear the end of this, will i? lmao.

thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!




JoJo (Anonymous) on May 10, 2010 03:17 am (Chapter 21: Come Undone)
Bye Lucas! Okay so that might be a little mean but it's what's best. This relationship is unfair to him and Madison. I think she really knows what she wants but is in total denial. Now there's nothing in the way except herself. Great update! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

haha poor lucas. boy gets no respect.

thank ya love! i appreciate it!






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