JoJo (Anonymous) on May 10, 2010 03:17 am (
Chapter 21: Come Undone)
Bye Lucas! Okay so that might be a little mean but it's what's best. This relationship is unfair to him and Madison. I think she really knows what she wants but is in total denial. Now there's nothing in the way except herself. Great update! Update again soon!
Author's Response: haha poor lucas. boy gets no respect.
thank ya love! i appreciate it!
lilcentralbobcat (Anonymous) on Apr 30, 2010 12:45 am (
Cast)
Okay so I know Writer's block can suck but please I need a fix am going to basic training in like ten days please am so hooked on this story . it completly rocks...Okay am done bagging now :)
Author's Response: haha i'm working on it, i swear!
and i shall do my very best to have something up within the next several days.
thanks for reading and reviewing love! i appreciate it a ton, and good luck with your basic training!
MochaB (Signed) on Apr 11, 2010 11:49 pm (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
Yes justin may choose the "wrong" time to fix things, but at least he actually tries to fix things instead of just running away so yeah. And madison gets herself into these situations s she can't blame justin for it all because a lot of it has to do with her. She can be such a freaking idiot. And she could fix things and choose what she really wants, even though yes it will make some mad which isn't abnormal for her, if she'd just stop being a coward. Once again JC is the only smart person in this bunch. *shakes head. Is severe annoyance* lol update soon! :o)
Author's Response: haha right on just about every point.
i think at this point, she wants normalcy and stability, unfortunately for her, those things don't seem to quite work in her life. haha.
oh yes... jc is most definitely the voice of reason here. lol.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!
glowbug917 (Signed) on Apr 07, 2010 12:06 am (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
"Apparently I have a thing for narcissists. Go figure."
I love you oh so much. This line pretty much killed me.
And filler my ass! It may have not been action-filled but one of them (Justin) was actually honest (still stupid given how long it took him to realize this but well, we knew this) and one of them had a (brief) moment of clarity.
So see! IMPORTANT THINGS ARE HAPPENING HERE! hahaha
Author's Response: lmfao somehow, i knew that was the line you would enjoy.
haha, i still say filler.
where are my updates woman?!?!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 06, 2010 10:29 pm (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
She wants him and she's in denial!! Oh Madison! She needs to stop torturing herself. She knows she misses the dysfunctional relationship that she and Justin had. Great update!
Author's Response: haha look at you all hitting the nail on the head. lol.
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
meggie (Signed) on Apr 06, 2010 05:42 pm (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
oh maddison, maddison, maddison. i want to hug and hit you at the same time. i don't think she's being annoying. she's coming across as a real person who's still in love with an ex (even though she doesn't know it) and has strong feelings for her current boyfriend. i get it. but can i just say that i did an honest to god happy dance when he was all 'do you know what it did to me when you left?' not that it's a good thing just that he FINALLY fucking said it! ok, more. now. or we can't be friends anymore and you sleep on the floor in vegas.
Author's Response: haha she knows it.. she just refuses to admit it. she's special that way.
as for justin... yeah. boy isn't too quick on the uptake, but ya know... he's male, therefore, slow.
haha you get more when i start seeing updates woman!
Hollie (Signed) on Apr 06, 2010 01:33 pm (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
“But, ya know… I knew the whole time I was being an idiot. I didn’t give a shit about her, and she wanted me just so she could one up you. I should have put a stop to it before you even came back in the picture.
And I could have told him that for nothing. It took him a year and a half to work that shit out? Apparently he's proof that you can't be pretty and smart.
Madison's starting to annoy me however. because buried under that babble she seems to have vague moments of realising she's just being a chicken shit and then she buries it under her shit again.
Author's Response: lmfao oh yes... justin is proof positive of that fact.
aww... poor madison. lol. but... very true. chick's all over the place at the moment.
thank ya love! mucho appreciated!
MissTasha (Signed) on Apr 06, 2010 06:33 am (
Chapter 20: Right In Front Of You)
She's so damn annoying. She needs to stop being an idiot because it makes her very unlikable. *scowl* Can someone slap her in the next chapter or stick their foot out and trip her? Something? Anything? Please update soon.
Author's Response: haha... she's got the best intentions, she's just a tad confused. so, we shall see!
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
jaye2kaye (Signed) on Mar 22, 2010 01:08 am (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
let the shit hit the fan... doesn't he realize that with as crazy as Keri is this only forebodes a shitstorm?
Author's Response: haha umm... yes, shit will be hitting the fan.
and well, justin's pretty, however... not so much with the smart. so we shall see! haha
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Mar 03, 2010 08:16 pm (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
You left it there! Why oh why would you do that to me? LOL.
Well all I can say is its about friggin time!! But something tells me this is the last of Keri. Because what would the end of Keri be without Mad kicking her ass into oblivion? Because that would be awesome. LOL
Author's Response: hahaha cause i'm evil. you know this.
umm... i have no idea what you're talking about. i wouldn't even dream of bringing back the demon whore from hell.
ok.. maybe i would. haha.
thank ya lady! much appreciated!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Mar 03, 2010 08:04 pm (
Chapter 18: A Disaster Waiting To Happen)
Sooo...I will never listen to Take It On The Run the same again. HILarious! Now, on to the next one.
Author's Response: lmfao awww, but it's soooo good! haha.
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 28, 2010 10:00 pm (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
ok number one: BWAHAHAHAHAAA!! LOOOOVES IT! But I feel keri needs something more to happen. That was definitely good, but not enough for me. Lol Number two: I love trace. He's probably been waiting on that moment for a looooong time. Number three: not surprised. Glad she heard it all actually. Now maybe they can both stop being stupid separately and just get back with each other cause those idiots and their stupidity were made for one another. I say that with nothing but love too. Sure ain't going to be that simple though because nothing is ever simple or easy when it comes to madison and justin. Still got lucas in the pic so madison can shut up about her bandmate dating some young brother cause she's the one aiding the real potential problem, and she most definitely just added fuel to the fire. Update soon ma'am. :o)
Author's Response: lmao something tells me the only way you guys will be satisfied is if madison douses keri is gasoline and sets her on fire. y'all are evil! haha
haha yes.. lucas is still around, and madison is most definitely not helping things. she's special that way. lol.
thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!
JTimm86 (Signed) on Feb 28, 2010 07:54 pm (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
AHHHHH!!!!! I've been waiting and waiting and WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT!!!!!! I know its not going to be a walk in the park after this. I know that the two probably aren't going to be together right away here but OH MY GAHHHHH!!!!! I'm so excited! Go Madison!
Author's Response: haha yay!
umm... we shall see. they're insane, so.. ya never know. lol.
thanks for reading and reviewing hun! i appreciate it!
champ (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 10:22 pm (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
oooo cool update...lol
Author's Response: thank ya love! i appreciate it a ton!
lilcentralbobcat (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 10:21 pm (
Chapter 19: Breaking Up Isn't So Hard To Do)
Awsome Update and i also think trace should get a girlfriend too cause i think right now he deserves it :) I cant wait for another awsome updat!!!!
Author's Response: haha hmm... now there's an idea. with all the nonsense the boy puts up with, he does atleast deserve something. lol.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
