Hollie (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 05:30 pm (Prologue)
I was going to make the comment about the math, but I see somebody else already has *lol*. Other than that I thought it was nicely done, straightforward and just puts across what it needs to in short and sweet fashion. :o)

Author's Response: Lol. I fixed the math. Thanks for reading :-)


DarkAngel (Signed) on Nov 14, 2009 09:52 am (Prologue)

OMG really good, drity, bad story. lol. sounds like this is going to get intresting...Update soon.



Author's Response: Lol. All famalies have drama..I just think this kind you only see either on lifetime or Jerry Springer. Thanks for reading. 


musicalmuse (Signed) on Nov 08, 2009 01:44 pm (Prologue)
Love this so far, but I'm a little confused about Justin's age... First it said it was 25 years between them, and her being 43 makes Justin 18... Then the daughter said she was 23 and 6 years his senior, wich makes him 17...Then in the end it was stated that he was 28...?

Author's Response: Yeah. I read the rules and it said no editing so I left it as it was but you are right. Vita is 43, Justin is 28, and Jamie is 23. So Justin is 15 years younger than Vita and Jamie is 6 years younger than Justin. I have to go back and re-edit everything once it's over. I apologize for the confusion. Now that I think about it...Vita could've very well been babysitting Justin since he was 6 when Jamie was born...eww and lol at the same time. 


d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 05, 2009 01:17 am (Prologue)
Ohhhh shady! I sense heartache and fights and a lot of drama in the future for these two. Besides, how can she trust Justin if he has her like his little secret? Doesn't look like he feels any guilt in the matter or the fact that what they are doing is wrong. At least, Jamie feels guilty about it. lol. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon.

Author's Response: Heartache, fights, and drama are the perfect elements in any story. Lol. As for Jamie feeling guilty and trusting Justin, you'll have to see. Everything isn't always what it appears to be. 


Becca Lynn (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2009 01:03 am (Prologue)
Really good! Never read a story like it. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)


-stevonnaj (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 04:20 pm (Prologue)
wowww! keep it coming!! lol

Author's Response: I'm going to try to. Lol. 


WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 12:52 pm (Prologue)
ooo sooo scandalous!  love it!

Author's Response: Thanks. Lol.


Manda Chasez (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 11:58 am (Prologue)
Wow! Scandalous! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hehehe. Thanks for reviewing. 


god gave me style (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 10:05 am (Prologue)
This is very interesting! I love it already, update soon!

Author's Response: It's going to get even more interesting next chapter for Jamie. Thanks for reviewing. 


Vikki (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 07:55 am (Prologue)

mmmmm.... what a lovely way to start my morning lol!

welcome to NaNoWriMo! *claps* I already know I'm going to love waiting for these updates! wooo baby!

 



Author's Response: Lol. Wouldn't we all love to start our mornings with a caramel macchiato and Justin?


MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 04, 2009 07:50 am (Prologue)
Love it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to try and update soon.


Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2009 04:39 am (Prologue)
I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :-)


JoJo (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2009 12:58 am (Prologue)
I'm interested to see where this goes! It's probably going to be drama filled and we all love a little drama! Update again soon!

Author's Response: It's going places. Lol. Trust and believe. I'll try and update soon.




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