Comments For Heartbreaker
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 27, 2014 01:05 pm (No Time Like Now)
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what he'll start to do to get her back.
Author's Response: I'll tell you... few hundred or so words from now lol
Author's Response: I'll tell you... few hundred or so words from now lol
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Jul 26, 2014 07:10 pm (No Time Like Now)
Wowsers, this chapter really packs a punch. The dialogue is especially compelling and I like how it all flows naturally; nothing feels forced or hokey. A little too much cussing for my comfort, but the story itself is spot-on.
Author's Response: Thanks honey - this one drove me a little crazy trying to get it right, but there's nothing like reading this kind of comment to make it feel worth it :o)
Author's Response: Thanks honey - this one drove me a little crazy trying to get it right, but there's nothing like reading this kind of comment to make it feel worth it :o)
