Okay, so I read this, since you know, after AIWD, I just HAD to read your other stories, duh! It was mandatory, okay? XD
I was so confused, when it ended at Chapter 17 and I was like panicking - LITERALLY going crazy here, thinking that, like...you put it on hiatus or something. O_O But then I saw the link, after getting my damn mind back, so I copy/pasted it into the thing.
And THEN did I read it all. (So, I really don't understand why I'm reviewing, here, when I could have there...) I suh-wear ta GAWD! You are an amazing writer; I am in love with your stories.
Shelby is so cute and I just really want JC, so bad. God, I love him! I'm glad that Melina effed off; I really hated her with a passion - I mean, YOU'RE SO ANNOYING. Leave Shelby alone, you psychopathic, manic stalker-chick. I just really didn't like her. I loved that Joshua and Shelby woman got to be together. :) It was just all so damn cute, haha!
But, uhm, wow! Before this gets any longer, I just wanted to write that I LOVED it. And I will definitely be reading any other story you put up!
More please. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank yuo so much for reading my stories and letting me know you enjoyed them. I can't tell you what it means to hear that. I've been taking a break from writing for a bit... I wrote for about 2 yrs straight and started to get all wrapped up weird in it. Hopefully I'll be back with something sometime. Thanks for taking the time to write a review-- it's MUCH appreciated.
OH MY GOD. THIS STORY. It is my favorite! And it makes me sad you haven't updated in awhile :(. But I get why it would be kind of hard...it sort of seems like a lot of the problems have already been solved. BUT SERIOUSLY, I WOULD NOT COMPLAIN IF YOU MADE UP NEW PROBLEMS JUST TO KEEP THIS STORY GOING.
I'm positive this is my favorite JC characterisation EVER. I love him bossy, I love him pervy, I love him needing more, and wanting more than just Thursday nights. Damn. Yeah, I...well, I reaalllllyyyyy hope you update this sometime, because it's SO good.
Author's Response: Hahah wow! thank you! I'm planning to finish All I Wanna Do, first. Get that off my plate and come back to this story. Not sure when but I do need to rewind and come from another angle. You're right, in that I've already solved all of my problems and lost my conflict. It took me MONTHS to figure that out. I really wanted JC to be with Shelby to fight the evil but... it resolves too much conflict too early. It's too easy. I need to make them WORK. Stay tuned. Not giving up, just taking a break! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!
Author's Response: Didn't want to leave a review without a response! I hope you enjoyed the update!
I keep checking back like every other hour even though you said it was going to be a while for the next update. *sigh*
I'm not even a "jc" girl, but I want more JC!!!
I love all of your stories . . from JC/Serena to the wrong email computer chick. Good stuff!
Author's Response: Look! 2 chapters! Hahaha!
"Play it again, Sam.”
Oh I love you for this almost as much as I love you for Bruno.
Author's Response: *snort. I feel like I'm as corny as JC sometimes. I totally didn't name him Sam on purpose. It just sounded like a sax player's name.
you are just such a lovely writer, i swear. i started this the other day but hadn't gotten to finish the first chapter cause work blah blah, but yes.
you have a way of incorporating these tiny moments that people could otherwise skim over but they're so specific to your talent that it's noticable.
anyway, love this already. more once i get there.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! IMO chapter 1 is a bit clunky but I think it gets better as it goes.
UGH!
you've gone and done it again... now I must continue reading and get no work done for the rest of the day.
whatever. its friday anyway lol!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! At least I didn't squeeze every last drop out of the chapter and have to scrimp my words to fit it on the archive, Lol.
Author's Response: Thanks, truckin' along!
I am very interested to see where this is going. They both seem to be 'broken' from past relationships. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Bustin' butt on the rest of it. I think you'll like it!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest. More coming soon... trying to finish and also edit old chapters at the same time.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks ! I enjoy it (most days)! Thank you for leaving feedback, more coming!
