OMGZ! He called her honey! *giggle*


That voice. It was him. ‘Holy. Fuck. It's. Him.  What do I do?!'

I think... what I love the most is that you have these female characters that are just so real. It can be you but I love to think that its me lol... or it can be anyone else reading this you know? because hell that would be me, staring at his bulge for a second too long HAHA!

He gave her a nod, just a tip of his head and wiggled a few fingers at her in a wave, then turned and walked inside. Sauntered inside. Goddamn, that man was sexy.

damn.... damn he is good.

and can I just say THANK YOU for writing this 3rd person because i love how your brain writes JC's brain. yes.

 ‘Well,' he thought to himself, ‘let's be honest, now.' He wanted to fuck her.

LMAO! i was thinking the same thing when he was going on about how she "intrigued" him... heh.

i love how she was so awkward initially and then by the end had this smartass little comment to give him:

"They have these things called cell phones. They're pretty handy. You can call me, on mine. From yours." 

it made me laugh out loud. so i now look like a crazy person at my desk. good job you. :) 

To me the appealing in this story is the music side; I enjoy your understanding about his connection with music. and share your wishes of success for him. The scene in the rehearsal was GREAT, I love bossy/creative/ in charge JC.

"She wondered if the rumors about him and his...assets... were true" hahahaha...We all wonder girl!