Vikki (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 11:14 pm (Chapter 4)

LMAO! ok horny!JC is my fav right now.

but maaaaan.... I want cake now. or pie. Or JC with cake and pie.

every time he smiled at her, her stomach lurched and she felt warm inside.

ugh I miss that. I need a man *pouts*.

"And I'll want to taste it." He leaned in to her, his lips almost touching her ear. "Maybe I could lick it off of some places, too."

yeah... i kid you not, I got a shiver right down my back lol!



Author's Response: *giggle*  GOOD! I like shivers!


glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 05:41 pm (Chapter 4)

okay this chapter was just full of awesome. they were playful and sexy and the banter was adorable.

hee, dirty little perverts



Author's Response: Hee. But of course!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 07:42 pm (Chapter 4)
Wow...That was HOT! I love how he shared his dessert with her. I cannot wait to see what happens when he actually gets her home.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! :D I thought it was pretty steamy myself. More coming over the weekend, stay tuned!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 11:32 am (Chapter 4)

jesus christ that was hot!! i hope the next update is coming like now!



Author's Response: Soon coming soon. Gotta make sure it's PERFECT.


grishy (Signed) on Nov 19, 2009 11:20 am (Chapter 4)

Lady...this was the best scene of a date ever! I keep saying this but, really your style is so good; this' smut but there's a plot (a good one) that pull you in to the sex scenes.

HOT, sexy, intelligent, funny... the peanut butter kiss...ufffff

I have to remember: do not read this story in the office.



Author's Response: I love you. TO DEATH. GUh. SO MUCH. Lol. I worked SO HARD on that scene. Thanks to all who've complemented!


musicmel (Signed) on Nov 19, 2009 10:14 am (Chapter 4)
Great update!!! I am not surprised at all this is how the date is going to end up. It's how I would have wanted it to end.

Author's Response: Thanks! *claps*


kacavendam (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 03:55 am (Chapter 4)
I like this story very much and the way you are describing so I just hope that you will continue with the updates on a regular basis:))))))

Author's Response: thanks!




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