Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing This story kind of fizzled out, and I'm planning on going back to edit some of what I have written and take it in a slightly different direction so that I can finish it. LOVE that you reviewed and that you like the story!
I have to say I was worried that the "it" scene would be ruined or tough to read from two points of views, but you totally pulled it off! It was hot from two angles and really nice to read how it felt for them both.
Great job!
Author's Response: *eep1* Thank you! LOL. It was uhm..interesting to write!
What do you mean, "This will be the last update for a bit". I refuse to comprehend this statement because it is unfair to me!! I should have held off on my review until you updated, held it ransom.
OMG I cannot believe that you are writing another story. At first I was mad because that means you might neglect JC and Serena, and we all know how much I love the two of them. After reading this chapter though I am not as mad as I first was, because DAMN! I like this JC. Very pervy.
Guess I will just have to reread the first five chapters (or just this last one) to tide me over until the next update... just don't make me wait to long. I am drained of all my patience, so who knows what I might do!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA. I love your reviews! I'll update as soon as I can, but I want to make sure I don't want to go back and change things. It'll be worth the wait.............I'm pretty sure. Thanks for the review! I'm so happy you like it!
all caught up. i love these two, man. but i have this sinking feeling that they're not just gonna be able to keep coasting in their little bubble of sexiness, haha.
but whatever, for now they are and i will take it! him putting her down for a nap was adorable.
now you're going to make me wait? harumph! evil girl.
Author's Response: I do apologize, my dear. It is a necessary pain! I'll update soon.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I try, I try. At least it's entertaining for a few minutes, eh?
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! WORKING ON IT!
wait... WHAT?! a few WEEKS?! no... no I wont stand for that.
this. this right here is my newest fav. update or bring back Serena or I will through the biggest hissy fit ever lol!
aaaaaahhhh! I loved this. it was sloooow and seeeexy and totally made me want JC more if that was even possible.
and i lol'd at him smelling toast. i dunno why i found that hysterical, could be bc I'm not an insomniac and I want to sleep lol! speaking of..... how adorable that he got her to nap on the couch! aaaawwwww!
Author's Response: Lol, yeah he put her down for her nap. Yeah, at least a week. I need to make sure the rest of the story makes sense!
Author's Response: LOL! Right? Daaaaaaaaaarn, I can't leave!
Author's Response: THANKS! :-D
Guilty I read in the office again.
Another thing I like about your stories are the confident, intelligent, sexy women you pair with JC, they're the key for a good balance. The reason why I could read an entire chapter (basically) about sex, without missing a beat.
Neet freak haha! I LOVE the fearless way you describe him (even phisically)
PS: I'm missing some JC/Selena action
Author's Response:
Hahah thank you! Yeah, sex takes up so much wordspace! argh.
I'm gonan try to pick up AIWD soon. It's hard to change gears between one story and another, one set of characters and another. Two different main characters, essentially two different JC's. The stories start to mix in my head and I want to keep them separate. thanks though!
Author's Response: Thanks, I think there's a good connection there. They have more in common than they think they do.
