Vikki (Signed) on Dec 02, 2009 11:42 pm (Chapter 8)

"Well...." He cleared his throat, unable to take his eyes off of the pop of color. "I can, usually. But uhm...sexiness of this magnitude really needs an in-depth evaluation."

LMAO!


"Don't break it. I haven't played with it yet."

body shots? body shots?! BODY SHOTS??!!! ..... you are trying to kill me. i just know it.


"I can't even imagine what would be a big enough deal that I can't know about it."


i feel torn. I get him and the frustratedness but ... shit a girl needs her space and time too. its not like she's coming from a normal/average breakup here.

 

NEXT! 



Author's Response:

shit a girl needs her space and time too. its not like she's coming from a normal/average breakup here.

 

Exactly. And really my fuck buddies don't need to know every detail about me. That's why you're a fuck buddy, not a boyfriend. KNOW YA PLACE! *LMFAO*

 

 




glowbug917 (Signed) on Dec 02, 2009 10:14 pm (Chapter 8)
well rod is just a little coozebucket of epic proportions, isn't he? why do i have this sinking feeling he's gonna be a pain in the nuts...

Author's Response: Isn't he just......ew. He's a combo of every asshole musician I've ever heard of, lol.



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Dec 02, 2009 09:59 pm (Chapter 8)

Okay I think this is the last chapter that I have read. And I need to stop reading chapters on my phone because it doesn't let me leave reviews, and that is why you are getting three reviews very quickly (it is not because I am that fast of a reader).

I have a new found appreciation for tequila after this story, and trust me I loved me some tequila before reading this chapter. Actually it has made my love and appreciation for BOTH JC and tequila grow. Your writing has that effect on me! 

 Okay on to the new chapters for me! 



Author's Response: Lol, this was a really fun chapter to write. I was reading a book for inspiration and it mentioned body shots, and then.........this chapter was born!



grishy (Signed) on Nov 30, 2009 07:36 am (Chapter 8)

Even with the most casual flings, the depth conversation always find a way to creep in, don't you think?

Evaluation & inspection...? who cares! It's body shots time!

"And then he would pull her to him, and tuck her to his chest, and turn the lights down. She would fuss about not being able to sleep, but an hour later she would be out cold. He could always get her to sleep. It seemed like the only time she really slept was when she was with him"  

...How sweet, romantic, endearing, sweep over your feets, is that?



Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Sweet, huh?



azchickadee (Anonymous) on Nov 29, 2009 07:46 pm (Chapter 8)
I'm getting about as frustrated as JC is with Shelby!  lol...she can't keep holding everything in like she's doing, it's not healthy.  Is she ever going to open up to him or is this "relationship" doomed?

Author's Response:  If I told you, you'd have no reason to read! : It's coming!



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 29, 2009 04:47 pm (Chapter 8)

I think they are both very stubborn on both sides of the spectrum. He wants to know her and she doesn't want him to know her. hmmm drama drama drama.



Author's Response: Mmmhhmm. Dramaaaaaaaaaaaaa. :D



kacavendam (Anonymous) on Nov 29, 2009 04:09 pm (Chapter 8)
read it. loved it. waiting for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thank you! More ocming soon.





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