Author's Response: Yes, it is nice to write a man not getting his way. Call me evil, I don't mind!
"Well... are you and this friend...well, I mean... is this friend a....does he..."
HAHAHA! I love her mom... prob bc that is SO my mom right there.
When would her dead ex fiancé not matter anymore? When would she be able to go through life and not have to consider Lucas or his ex-wife, or his children?
See. This right here could make her sound sooo insensitive. He's dead for christ sake, you're suppossed to show some respect and all. but damnit! I get that "ok I want to move on!" vibe she has going on though. poor thing.
If he wanted to, Rod could totally throw a kink into that plan.
No. Please tell this isnt some foreshadowingness - fuck I hate Rod.
JC started to smile, his tongue snaking out to lick his bottom lip. She almost had him. She knew it. "I do like that part. And you did buy dessert. Can't let that go to waste."
HA! Men... *shakes head* ... so easy but I LOVE HIM! and he loves her... which i think is gonna cause uh-oh's.
Author's Response: Lol. mmmmhhhmmmm. cause he's not supposed to fall for her. Darnit. Give him a little sex and suddenly he's in love.
Shelby is starting to piss me off. I was sympathetic to her not telling him about Lucas in the beginning, but now I am like JC and it is just getting old. Or maybe I just like taking JC's side which is probably more true than anything...
And can I just say I love the way you write dialogue. Their conversation during dinner seemed so real. In some stories (even published stories) the dialogue seems so forced and made up, but yours is so damn realistic. Love it.
Author's Response: Yes she is a bit unecessarily tight lipped, but she feels she has a good reason to be. Hopefully more comes to light in the chapters I'll be posting over the weekend!
"Yeah, fuck buddies. Friends who fuck."...simple as that
"Damn, woman. Really, what are you doing for the rest of your life?"...he keep propossing and propossing to her, and they even get a clue, about 'L' thing hanging above their heads.
Reading my way through next chapter, between office breaks.
Author's Response: Hee! I'm just so excited that people are reading it, and that they like it. CLUES CLUES CLUES! I love you
Author's Response: Patience, my pretties! The next chapter will explain so much!
I get frustrated trying to figure out what she is trying to hide. ugh! I can't wait to find it out!
Great Update... a part of me wanted JC to just leave.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it's moving slow, my next few updates will probably be one big bunch for people to chew on while I edit the ending.
