grishy (Signed) on Dec 07, 2009 03:39 pm (Chapter 11)

"Every time he got on a stage and let loose, it was like a religious experience, like being transported to another planet, another time, another place, where music was the law of the land. The beat was the sheriff and the lyrics were the deputies and if the music said to rock, you rocked. JC liked that. He lived by that law." _ That's how I see him, on stage

"Finally, in a fit of frustration, he pushed the cover of her laptop closed."_ I was waiting for this to happen for so long

 




glowbug917 (Signed) on Dec 06, 2009 04:09 pm (Chapter 11)

Well...that was...I don't even really have words, actually. Oh who are we kidding? You know me, I don't shut up.

It was so not the way I was expecting it to come out, that's for sure. I don't know who I'm more sympathetic toward at the moment, they're both such messes. Possibly Shelby, because this is clearly just...eating her up.

Oh yeah and have I mentioned Rod sucks big monkey balls? Cause yeah.



Author's Response: I was hoping it would be a shocking, ugly surprise! :-D



Vikki (Signed) on Dec 03, 2009 11:01 pm (Chapter 11)

awwwwwww maaaaaaan! this is making my heart hurt.

 

Or she would bare her soul to JC and spill everything, and give in to having feelings for him, of the more-than-friends-with-benefits kind and hope that his feelings for her weren't diminished when he found the information he had been hounding her for, that had been unwilling to give, for fear he would hate how evil and conniving she was.  Used to be.

 

Ok Shelby woman, key words here? used-to-be! You're not like that anymore so let's let by gones be by gones. lol!

 

Not that it mattered. She was going to have to let him go soon, anyway.


STOP SAYING THAT! *puppy dog eyes* I dont want it to be over.

 

And it wasn't a Thursday, and he didn't get to see her, but he was okay with that. He could still call it a good night.


aaaaaaawwwww! SEE this is why I love this and them and together. not apart! crazy Shelby.

and in case I didnt make it clear before I HATE ROD! Its all his stupid ego loving fame whoring fault! If it wasnt for him than maybe Shelby's crazy "the end is coming" thoughts would be postponed a little longer. 

She's giving me suuuuch a bad armeggedonish feeling. I just hope JC's ready and willing to do something about it.



Author's Response:

Your analysis is intriguiging!!!  I can't even comment because there's just so much coming but yeah you're right... what she thinks is happening is different than what's really happening. And JC has to convince her of that. *nods*

 

I posted CH 12 already. I'm going to try to finish it up this weekend. No promises at ALL. 




musicmel (Signed) on Dec 03, 2009 10:22 pm (Chapter 11)

Great update!!!! :)

But the ending, wow she is not going to break JC's heart... she was going to shatter it.



Author's Response: Thanks! Let's hope not. They're cute together, no? :-D





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