I love this story. I never imagined Chris in this light and now that you have brought him to life as a romantic I can't help but just love the Chris in your story.
Great job! Oh, and your writing is amazing. Truly talented!
Author's Response: awww...thanks! It's been kind of fun writing Chris this way. He wasn't ever my favorite or one that I really cared about, but now that I've been writing this story he's slowly but surely growing on me. And I really love writing him and Kris together as a couple. They are very different than any of my other characters, but I love them! I'm glad people are enjoying it so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Author's Response: ahahaha!! hadn't even thought of that! I might have to put that in the next chapter :)
So...you managed to mention two of my favorite teams (the ChiSox and the Pittsburgh Steelers) in the same chapter. So yeah, love it!
I can totally sympathize with Chris at the end of the chapter :( I once broke a kid's collarbone playing football...I felt terrible! Yay for him meeting the family though!
Author's Response:
ouch! a broken collarbone? that's awful!
Yes, meeting the family was a big step and it went well! yea :) Kristen still needs to meet his family, but all in good time. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
PAAAUULLIIIIEEEEE<3
fucking Indians....hate them...
I do not need to see someone about my anger problems with sports! hahaha
ddr....the game that makes it look like you can't dance....stupid game kicks my ass the times i've played it...and also...i've cheated the same way! haha!
i laughed at the its gonna be me line..ahah
...so whaattt that the ER knew me by my first name when i played softball...I got in quicker! :) ahha.
and i cridged at the end. you know why! i knew it was coming!
no more cheating!? but...thats how i play, dirty! hahaha. oh darn...
and lovveerr, you know i loved it!
Author's Response:
ha! "The game that makes it look like you can't dance." I've only played DDR a couple times. It's fun, but it makes me feel like a completely uncoordinated idiot...which, now that I think about it, I am, so maybe it's not totally the game's fault.....
lol...I know, sorry about the cringe part at the end, but at least I warned you it was coming. But now we get to see Kris on pain meds! hahaha....should be fun!!!
and the "It's gonna be me" line just popped right out there. Totally not planned. Just happened. Love when that happens!
