Lol. When I saw 'Michaelchuk' I immediately thought of Paige. And Kara came through with the Paige mannerisms that I loved and adored. Loved the dialogue between Justin and Kara, it was funny but serious at the same time. I also liked how you put actual events into the story. I was starting to think that the preppy kid that bumped her was up to something, maybe be the bomber now that this chapter has been posted, but I wasn't sure.
Now when Justin was at the Nurses station, I thought that they nurse was working for him too but now I'm thinking she's just being nice for him.
And Heather was hilarious in the bathroom trying to primp before the turbulance hit. Hopefully Justin has some super secret spy stuff to get them out of this mess...unless he used that flash thing from Men In Black and that's why Heather can't remember anything.. This has my imagination all over the place. Lol
Author's Response:
haha, that's awesome. I'm really glad you picked up on that. I really enjoyed writing the dialogue. As for the nurse's station, I thought about making her work for him, but I wanted him to be a little more innocent and charming. And yes...she was so funny. I had a really great time writing her there.
And you just never know how she got there. :)
This chapter made me realize that I am definitely not the only fan of Degrassi: The Next Generation (thank goodness, cause I catch a lot of hell for being almost 30 and still watching it). :)
Now on to the story. First, I have to say that this is the first story I have read by you. I am quite glad I started, because I am enjoying this very much so far. I think you have a great style for writing and I am really excited to read more from you.
I really dig super secret spy type Justin. I am a nerd about politics and government, so Justin in it makes him SO much hotter.
I can't wait to read the rest of this!
Author's Response:
haha...I was wondering if anyone would pick up on that, lol. I was having a hard time thinking of an official sounding doctor name, and Paige popped into my head lol. But yes, zmg...love that show. It's okay, I'm halfway to 30 and I still watch it too!
*blush* thank you so much for the compliments, I'm really glad you enjoy my writing thus far. I'm very excited for you to enjoy reading more, too! It makes it worthwhile to know that people actually like what you write. I'm still kinda new here, so the compliments are great, and keep my writing!
As far as recommendations, if you want a long, I would suggest Nympho, as it's the one I update the most and that people really seem to like. There's also (Washed Up), or Give Me Another Chance, although I'm kinda stuck on Washed Up at the moment (although it's definitely the best I've written stylistically). I also just resurrected give me another chance from the old archive--so that's still in progress (and six years old, but not bad).
BUT--If you want a short or visual, I highly recommend anything in the Dirty Series (I like The First Lady because it was my first visual ever, but everyone around here seems to like Doctor, Doctor (it won super sexy smut at the NF Awards) although I'm not sure why. I think it's one of my weakest).
Anywhhhoooooo...I love that you're a politics and government nerd. I'm not, so hopefully I don't royally screw something up, but I will definitely keep the secret agent Justin coming...'cause frankly, he is supppppppper hot.
Thank you SO much for the review, and the kind words. It really helps motivate me to write more, and makes me feel appreciated (as it does all authors!)
Love love!
Author's Response: Thanks Miss Tasha! :) Glad you're liking it, and thanks for the review ;)
Author's Response: Yah, thanks, dear! I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks so much for the review, it means the world. :)
Girl, I felt her anguish! I was expecting her to just go off on the security asswipe at any moment. Then Justin comes through all suave and stealth-like. Hotness! Digging the first chapter mama.
Ki
Author's Response: I totally would have gone off on security, for sure. He is definitely stealth. And definitely hot as a secret agent! haha. Thanks for the review, darlin'.
GAAAAAAAAAAAH OMGOMGOMG this is so exciting!!! you have no idea how long I have wanted someone to write this story!!!!!!! I never could come up with a good plotline myself and there's something about JamesBondesque!Justiin that just melts my butter *giggle*
I LOVE LOVE LOVE what you've got going so far butImustknowwhathappensomg!!!!! Please post more sooooon *bounce**bounce**bounce*
Author's Response: Haha, I love your enthusiasm! I tried to channel that for this chapter. It was really hard for me to come up with a plot line because I don't usually write actiony stuff. I'm more of an introspective descriptive writer, so trying to portray action was definitely a challenge. I must say, thoug, it's turning out to be great. As I mentioned when I updated the last chapter, I got a burst of inspiration, so this is turning out longer than an anticipated--but it's worth it for my favorite author. haha. Hope you enjoy it. ;)
Author's Response: hehehe....I agree! I'm glad you think so, and glad you like it. Thanks for the review, darling~!
Author's Response: I know right? I didn't have to look hard to find inspiration since that's almost exactly what happened to me at the airport a few weeks ago. Except they almost ruined my camera. Damn security. Grr... ;) Thanks for the review and the update lady, glad you're liking it. Will have another chapter up today.
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you, Tina! Glad you like it! I just updated, but I should have another chapter to you in a hot minute.
