SJane (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 07:19 am (Let It Rain)
omg love love love love!!!! Nothing more to say lol


AmberW (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 05:31 am (Let It Rain)

I LOVED this....I think I have said this in every review, but I can't help it!

I liked seeing everything just come together for Justin.  And as much as I hated the "think about it" line then having the chapter end, I thought it was great!  I mean, it would have been typical to just have him stay, but I loved this much more!!

 Great job!



azchickadee (Anonymous) on Apr 17, 2011 07:44 pm (Let It Rain)
and I'm dead.  you killed me. 

Author's Response: lol...that review just made me giggle...


MochaB (Signed) on Mar 14, 2011 10:34 pm (The In Between)
eeek!! ok i'm sorry this happened to her, but i'm not going to lie that i'm happy! lol skylar, even though nice, was just one of the road blocks to madison and justin being able to build back their relationship. of course they still need to talk about lots of things because things are still so awkward and in-between, and i think they need to develop that friendship again, which will lead to trust and being comfortable with each other again, but they can make it back to what they were.  better than what they were! i'm excited. lol skylar is gone, justin is  slowly but surely getting back to his old self, and i know madison is confused, but i hope she figures things out soon too.  she knows what she wants. she's probably just scared. anyway, glad i caught up! can't wait to read the next chapter! feel free to write another short about these two in the meantime. lol :o)

Author's Response:

lol. This story is currently giving me a headache because I'm struggling with the whole switching from Justins POV to Madisons thing...I'm not usually a fan of of changing who's head I'm writing in, especially in the middle of the story. Anywho...I've got the next chapter mostly written if I could just get it mapped out the way that I want it! I wasn't originally going to show her and Skylar's breakup but I felt like I needed to, to show how confused she is about everything.

Thank you SO much for the feedback! I'm glad you got caught up too! New reviews kick my butt into gear to get another chapter out! Promise it'll be soon! 

<3LT



musicmel (Signed) on Feb 03, 2011 03:28 pm (The In Between)
Excuse me… you cannot leave me hanging like this. I’m gonna need more, like now ;)
This was such a great chapter. I am actually surprised that Skylar acted so calmly, for some reason I expected a huge scene. Nevertheless great job my dear!


azchickadee (Anonymous) on Feb 01, 2011 04:42 pm (The In Between)
forgive me for leaving you an uneven numbered review. I know how you feel about those! Lol...just want to leave you a review, even though I gave you my thoughts last night. Thanks for letting me beta it yesterday :) it made my bad day better


AmberW (Signed) on Feb 01, 2011 01:08 am (The In Between)

Great chapter!

I always forget how much I miss these two and then you drop them back into my life and I like salivate wanting to know more!

I'm kinda sad for Skylar, kinda not cause I really want Mad and JT together :)



azchickadee (Signed) on Dec 11, 2010 08:54 am (Critical )
well worth the wait!!  and I LOVE the parts you added! :)  I miss not giving you a novel length review, but you already know how I feel about most of this chapter.  I love Amber and JC together.  When you get done with Justin and Madison you should think about writing their story.  That would be awesome!!!  I love Justin's pseudo-drunk, rambling voicemail message to Madison.  Had me cracking up!  I can't wait to see what happens when he gets back to LA.  eeep!!  :)


MochaB (Signed) on Sep 17, 2010 08:45 pm (I Gotta Feelin')
Finally! I fell behind, but I'm caught up now. So I was thinking justin could put his album out on madi's label. Wasn't sure how that would even work or come about, but it was something I thought about...until learning that he doesn't want universal. Lol I was thinking it was a possibility since it's indie and I didn't know at that time that it was owned by Uni until now. Sooo yeah moving on. Haha. Great to see justin returning to his old self! And I don't think the text msgs were a bad move. They both each have a lot to think about and consider with everything going on in their individual lives. So maybe they shouldn't communicate much now while they figure out what they want and he gets back on track...but I can't help but want them to talk!! anyway, I can't wait to read more. Can't wait to read another flashback or little short on the good times. *coughhinthintcough* lol :o)

Author's Response:

hahaha. I think you may be psychic. The idea of him going on her label may come up at a later time. ;) I am currently ridiculously stuck on this story and I'm fairly sure it's because all I can think about with these two characters is smut. Needless to say, I'm in the middle of writing out a shortie to post in the hopes that it'll get me over this writer's block that I've got so be on the lookout!!

So glad that you got to catch up! And thank you so so so much for reading! 

<3



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Aug 11, 2010 10:24 pm (I Gotta Feelin')
Well I'm glad to see we're starting to see his old self back. :-) Now hopefully we'll be seeing these two together here soon? :-) Very pleased with the update AS always..and can't wait for the next installment. ♥♥

Author's Response:

yay! you DO still love me. HAHAHAH kidding. <3

Who knows...we mayyyyyyyyyy see them together. Or not. You'll just have to keep reading. lol. 

Love you girl!

<3



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 10, 2010 11:06 pm (I Gotta Feelin')

I *love* seeing the old Justin!! I was smiling while reading the entire chapter.

What's funny is, they would totally be the guys to do something like this, be the drunk friends in a bar who thought hey were nobody, just enjoying the alcohol and good friends... then BAM the next day its everywhere! lol I would like a night out with them :)



Author's Response: dude, me too. i think they'd be awesome to party with like this. It is my goal to be invited to a Chris K party sometime before I leave Orlando. I loved the scene with Johnny getting all up in their faces about going out and causing a scene because when they planned it out, that didn't even come to mind. Why should it anymore, you know? Then again, us crazy fans who want them together would totally read something into it if it happened like this. I remember seeing a pic of Justin and Chris getting dinner somewhere in NYC--it was last year sometime I think--and I was like...DUDE! They're plotting. lol.


azchickadee (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2010 11:04 pm (I Gotta Feelin')

hahaha....I'm still giggling over them being drunk together and imagining JC's giggle...guh!!  I love them!!  :) 

You know most of my thoughts about this chapter so there's not much to say here, which means this is going to be a less-than-novel-length review.  However, I did want to say something about this line: "I did. When I wasn't married." He finished off.   Even thought I COMPLETELY missed the first mention of JC being married (hello!!  where the hell was I??)  I LOVE the fact that he's faithful.  I don't know who this girl is that he's married too, but she is one lucky girl because it is obvious, just from that one line, that he loves her very much...at least I hope so...and if he doesn't he's a very good actor.  Which we ALL know he's not.  So I'm going to stick with my original thought that he's in love with his wife and that makes me happy :)

awesome job, my dear!!  And the ending was perfect ;)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 02:16 pm (Did I Ever Tell You)
ok...so i was glad Madi buckled, but I'm even more glad that Justin stayed strong. I hope he keeps his promise and that's all. I think he needs to let go completely of Madi, for his own sake. Ah...JC and Justin, seamless.

Author's Response:

lol yes. I love me some JC/Justin interaction. :) They're my fav.

We'll just have to see if he can completely let go or if she comes fighting back. You never know. Sometimes love like their's can withstand crazy shit. ;) I tend to believe that it can. 



Tink (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 06:29 am (Did I Ever Tell You)
I love this story and can't wait to read more. Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks girl! :) More shall be u sooooonsies <3


JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:14 pm (Did I Ever Tell You)
I am so in love with this story! I get so excited when I see an update! This was a great chapter by the way. I was so glad when he finally responded to her message I thought he was just going to be stubborn and really ignore it. Like I said, love it!! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

YAYYY :) Thank you for the review!!!

Yeah, he was going to be stubborn and not respond but I gave him what for and we had a knock down and I told him to do it. lol. 

I have a goal of having this completed by September sometime so hopefully updates will be coming frequently. Plus, I'm actually starting to have days off instead of working m-f doing a 40 hour week. lol. More time to WRITE! YAY!

Thanks for reading, love!

<3LT





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