Author's Response:
thanks for the review, love!
you're right about that. JC and his mom both felt like Madison would probably drop the guy if Justin came around so they didn't view it as a problem. Whether or not that's actually true remains to be seen ;)
thanks again!
<3LT
Author's Response:
seriously...the poor piano :( But him taking his aggression out on something that he loved seemed natural. So I went with it.
That chapter hurt though. lol.
Thank you for the review love!
~LT
Author's Response:
ahhh. I'm sorry if it made you get tear-y!!!! :(
But I'm glad that you liked the chapter! It kinda broke my heart to write it. I want them to be together and happy as much as my reader's do. lol.
Thanks for the review, love!
~LT
see...told you I'd review as soon as I got home! Although...I'm kind of sad someone didn't beat me to the punch. I was planning what I was going to say in my two reviews....lol....
okay, let's get down to business:
I grimaced at the mention of what I assumed to be her new boyfriend's name. Whose name was Skylar anyway? It was such a dumb name.
You literally took the words right out of my mouth with this one. lol...as soon as "Skylar" was mentioned I was like, "Skylar?! Are you kidding me? *cougg-gay-cough*
Although my heart is breaking for Justin I LOVED his reaction when he got home to Madison being in a relationship. I've always pictured him as having a short temper (maybe because that's how we ALL write him! lol) and the way you wrote his temper tantrum was SO easy to picture. And when he looked at the piano I was like, "NO! Not the piano!" And then he cried :( and I wanted to give him a hug....after I slapped him upside the head for being such a jerk and a douchebag and letting Madison walk away in the first place.
I was surprised that she showed up at his house. That took some guts! And I'm glad she's being honest with him and is going to make this hard for him. It should be hard. After what he did I would have been disappointed if she had just let him off easy. He needs to sweat a bit and decide whether or not he's really ready and willing to fight for her. And then he needs to fight for her! Damn it! He needs to get his confidence back and then woo the socks (or panties...whichever may be the case) of her and win her back!! :)
Basically, I loved it. As usual! And I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
as much as I'd love it if she did just make it easy on him...I can't do it. It's too predictable. Originally she was going to be all supportive and by his side but...I think he needs to do it for himself. He needs to grow up a bit. So glad that you love my story. I'm fairly attached to it too. :)
Thanks for the review love!
~LT
*death glare*
as one of my readers always tells me, "you and your damn cliffhangers!!" lol...two in a row? seriously?? guh!!
ok...what did I think? uhm...loved it! I love how I am able to so perfectly imagine Justin in my head as I'm reading. You've done a fantastic job capturing his character and the way you write is very expressive. Bravo! *claps* Uhm...I loved the whole grocery store run in...thought it was perfect! And yes, I was kind of waiting for Madison to drop a bombshell like this! lol...question is, is it really serious? Or is Justin going to be able to seduce her away?? (lol....I think he'd be able to seduce anyone away from anyone if he really wanted to, let's be honest! am I right??)
I hope you're writing the next chapter, cuz I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job! :)
Author's Response:
hahahaha. you'll have to wait and see how serious it is. but I do know that if i were with a man, all Justin would have to do is settle those damn eyes of his on me and I'd leave whoever I was with. Madison seems to have a mind of her own at the moment so I really don't know what she's going to do. We got in a serious argument last night when I was writing this. Because she up and decided oh hey, I'm going to have a boyfriend. And I'm like SERIOUSLY??? You just complicated things! And I tried to get around it but she just had to have her way. So now I have to figure out how to change things back to what I wanted them to be. Oh well, just makes more of a plot twist. I'm ok with that. It was slightly predictable. haha. Glad you liked it!
Author's Response: thank youuuu! I'm glad you're liking it! <3
1. Amazing writing
2. I LOVE that song. The way he caresses the microphone-damn why is he only 17?? LOL
3. I love that Madi showed up-got me all excited :)
Author's Response:
bahahaha. yes, it is unfair that he's 17.
Madi wasn't sposed to show up. lol. Bitch characters taking over the story. lol.
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks for the review love <3 I should be updating again soon! This chapter kind of left me needing to update soon b/c I'm excited for the next one!
~LT
