I so didn't expect her to be a virgin. I'm intrigued and want more! Great job!

hahaaha. poor girl almost died at the site of him. i totally would've hit it. lol.

and writing in first person is fine. it's actually better sometimes because you can illustrate better the characters thoughts instead of always saying "she wondered" or "she thought" 

liking it so far :) 

Great chapter. Very good that he reacted the right way about her being a virgin. And I think it sounds great like this you don't have to change it to "I". Hope you update soon again