ltaylor03 (Signed) on Mar 31, 2010 09:49 pm (
Chapter 16)
DUDDDDDDDDDDDDDE!!! You totally threw me for a loop with that one! I really didn't see that coming! Nice job! lol. Did you need a few shields for that one? haha
I'm glad Bella finally grew some balls. At least for the moment.
Author's Response: Yay I needed the shield and then some for that chapter. But Bells needed to 'see' what life would be like if she would have followed the Bloodline. I'm glad that it was a loop for everyone though, I had to mix it up a littl.
Bells got some balls thats for sure,we'll see how things change for her!
Thanks :)
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 13, 2010 08:04 pm (
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oh yes! fooled me! thank god...she still opened her eyes! whoo!
Author's Response: I fooled everyone with that chapter. But she needed to 'see 'her life if she continued the Bloodline.
Thanks :)
d_simplicity (Signed) on Mar 11, 2010 03:12 am (
Chapter 16)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh omggggggggggg finally!!!! im so excited now more please!!! these cliff hangers are killin me.
Author's Response: Cliffhangers are my best friend! lol
Thanks :)
JoJo (Anonymous) on Mar 11, 2010 02:27 am (
Chapter 16)
Interesting! I like it! I'm so glad the last chapter was a dream. The whole time reading this chapter I was cheering her on. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: I think Bells needed to see what her life could actually be like with Gavin. So yes I was glad it was a dream as well
Thanks :)
Lady T (Anonymous) on Mar 11, 2010 12:10 am (
Chapter 16)
Yay! Back 2 reality. I was ready 2 cry over the last chapter. Good work as usual!
Author's Response: Awe thanks :) I knew she needed a wake up call and it had to be a dream or something to force her to making the choice she needed to
CarolinBau (Anonymous) on Mar 10, 2010 11:46 pm (
Chapter 16)
*Stands and jumps up and down cheering Bells on*
WOW!!! .....
Well first, thank goodness that was all a dream....
Second, yes! I smell a happy ending somewhere...
Third, awesome chapter! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Woot Woot! Go Bells!
Happy Ending? ha
Thanks :)
NSYNCilicous85 (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 10:05 pm (
Chapter 16)
yayyyy!! i REALLY hope this is going where i think it's going! i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu hahaha freaking fantastic
Author's Response: haha.. it's going somewhere thats for sure!
Thanks :)
Covergirl (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 09:35 pm (
Chapter 16)
Yes!!! Love the twist. Didn't see that coming at all...but I did have my fingers crossed that Arabella would find a way out. Great update!
Author's Response: I knew I was going to get some backlash for Arabella choosing to marry him, but having it all be a dream made it all better!
Thanks :)
DesperateThoughts (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 08:24 pm (
Chapter 16)
Thank God! I thought I was about to have to come and hunt you down again lol! I know her father was fuming! I could see the smoke coming outta his ears when she got on the mic. Great update!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 07:09 pm (
Chapter 16)
YES YES YES YES!!!! I'm so glad she finally stood up to her family. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
champ (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 02:44 pm (
Chapter 16)
hahahaha.. nice previous chapter...lol keep the chapters coming.
shan030709 (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 02:17 pm (
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You are such a trickster!!! But I absolutely love it!!! I am glad that she has finally stood up and I cannot wait to read what happens next!!!
AmberW (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 02:16 pm (
Chapter 16)
I am literrally clapping and woo hooing in my chair-thankfully there is noone home! Great job-so glad she redeemed herself :)
TrousersnakeLove (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 01:12 pm (
Chapter 16)
THANK GOD FOR THAT! Like, seriously. Can't wait (and I reaaally mean it) for the next update.
MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 12:38 pm (
Chapter 16)
Woot woooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Woohoo!!!
Thanks :)
