Comments For Bloodline
Lady T (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2010 08:28 pm (Chapter 26)
Omg! Sorry that her dad died. Totally loving Justin's character in this one. I'm ready for them to get married and have some babies :-)

Author's Response:

Married... babies... wow! That's really fast! Heck this is me were talking about, it could happen!! lol

 

Thanks:)




AmberW (Signed) on Apr 20, 2010 03:04 am (Chapter 26)

The Justin in this story is definitely not the arrogant jerk that he seems to sometimes be in real life.

I haven't reviewed in awhile (I know I suck) but I am now and I just can't help but say great job!  This chapter makes me sad, but all things happen for a reason!



Author's Response:

Actually this is how I imagine Justin would actually be like.

You do suck for not reviewing. Boo! but I'll forgive you, just this time. This was another sad chapter but you are right. Everything happens for a reason.

Thanks girly :)




JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2010 12:16 am (Chapter 26)
I'll have to agree with you. I'm so in love with the Justin in this story! I needed a tissue reading this chapter. Sad but great update! Can't wait for another one!

Author's Response:

Justin is.... o-mazing! love him. Its sad to see her goign through yet something else.

Thanks ;)




shan030709 (Signed) on Apr 19, 2010 10:41 pm (Chapter 26)
You did not warn us about needing tissues!!  It is heart wrenching and the bit about their being a problem with her shoes, is going to make for some dark days ahead for Arabella.  I can just feel it!!  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  You really did make Justin that much more loveable!!

Author's Response:

Crap, I did forget the tissue warning this time. I am usually good about that considering I cried everytime I read this chapter. I'm a sap (Shh dont tell anyone)

The problem with her shoes ... hmmm I'm writing this so you can only imagine! lol

I want to reach through this story and pick just up and squeeze him :)




CarolinBau (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2010 08:58 pm (Chapter 26)

Umm...Kind of confused about this I must say.

I really like the update and the Justin in the story, but I can't help but feel just weird to it... 



Author's Response:

Death isn't always easy to write about, or read about. I hope that I can make that issue up to you!

Don't hesitate to ask questions or throw ideas at me!

Thanks :)




XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2010 08:55 pm (Chapter 26)
C'mon Mel, hasn't she suffered enough? I love Bells but now i'm thinkin' of killin' some people in her family, specifically Omar. C'mon, the dude's letting his sister think that she killed her father? Not cool, man, not cool. I think i'd like to kill him first, then the mother, and i would kill the father but you took care of that for me. The sister not so much 'cause she wasn't as strict as the rest. I just hope things are much better for Bells. But hey, she's with Justin, things can only be better. Right?

Author's Response:

I dislike her sister more, I think. Don't get me wrong I dislike them all haha Her brother has let his guard down more than once. But they all suck! haha

Bells has suffered so much. But you cant really appriciate the good unless you've exp the hurt.

Thanks :)




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 19, 2010 08:47 pm (Chapter 26)
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this and I hope Justin can find a way to make this better for her. PMS

Author's Response:

It's funny how Bells grew up with no one, no friends or family to really help her through things, and when she found Justin she let him without question!

THanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2010 08:44 pm (Chapter 26)
well that makes 2 of us :-) very intense update..but oh so very very good :-) keep it up..hope it only goes up from here.

Author's Response:

Very intense thats for sure! I can't comment on the other part :) Remember Kroll with help me.

 

Thanks ;)






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