Comments For Bloodline
Covergirl (Signed) on Jul 12, 2010 12:06 am (Bloodline)
I absolutely, positively loved it! I wouldn't change a thing. So glad that her mother is willing to try.

Yeah, I love a happy ending! =D

Author's Response:

Yay! I think it spoke wonders that her mother was willing to at least try. That took a lot for her to change her mind, even slightly.

Happy Ending! Yay!
Thanks though for staying with me the entire story!



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2010 07:40 am (Bloodline)
I reeeaaaallllly loved this ending!! I can't even put it into words how amazing this story has been, really I can't. Just know that I look forward to all you're future stories. :-) wicked love to ya my dear! ♥

Author's Response:

Thanks :) Sooo much! I don't think anyone understands how much I love when people actually like my stories. Makes me very happy :)

I have a couple stories that I'm still working on and a few new ones up my sleeve but I won't hint on those right now.

Thanks for always reading, reviewing, and enjoying the stories!!

:)



AmberW (Signed) on Jul 06, 2010 10:38 pm (Bloodline)

LOVED IT!  You have a gift for the last line leaving a lasting impression :)

Great job!



Author's Response:

It's exactly how I pictured it would end from the beginning. Even with the different routes I was going to take, I think she ended up exactly where she was supposed to in her life. Plus she gained a backbone and standing on her own two feet! 

Thanks for reading all the way through and enjoying it!

:)



JoJo (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2010 10:29 pm (Bloodline)
I'm so sad to see this end! I enjoyed it all the way through. It has been one of my favorite stories. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome writing with us.

Author's Response:

Awe! Such kind words! I loved this story from the very first thought until the very end. I'm just glad someone other than me enjoyed it!

Thanks for sticking through this with me and through all my stories. :)



XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2010 08:37 pm (Bloodline)
You're not a writer? Pfft, you could've had me fooled. The entire thing...it was lovely. You brought everything together pefectly. The emotions...I felt their emtions, it was so great. You wrote it so well. I love Bells and Justin, I can't even believe that this story is over. The whole Bloodline thing...makes me glad it happened in the first place, to be honest, or else she wouldn't be the Bells we know and love. To be honest I had to read the last line to understand it but when it hit me...wow. You, Miss Mel, are an amazing writer, even though you're not a writer. I can't wait to see what else comes to your brain.

Author's Response:

I tried to get those last three paragraphs to be put from two directions. 'Bloodline' actually being how she was raised, the bloodline, and dealing with it. But also having "Bloodline' as a reference to, Justin. Because she believed in him, she loved him, he was her everything. I *hope* I managed to get that to come through or at least I hope I did.

When Justin says, "I owe... your Bloodline." I wanted him to be almost thankful that she had dealt with 'The Bloodline' because, without the bloodline it wouldn't have led her to him (or him to her)

Anyways, thank you sooo much for all your kind words! You're really amazing!

:)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 06, 2010 08:33 pm (Bloodline)
....i think i'll need to come back & give you a coherent reviews...i'm in tears. i'd be a blubbering mess of incoherent babbling. the only thing i can clearly think to say is: thank you hun.

Author's Response:

Awe! I love tears! That means I did something right!

I can't to hear what you think, without a blubbering mess!! jk, incoherent blabbling could be entertaining!

Thanks :)





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