Comments For Bloodline
Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2010 12:32 pm (Tales)
well It's about stinking time lady!! that was very very nice :-)  hmm are we gonna see Bells kick some conniving bitches ass? :-)

Author's Response:

With the end nearing (very very close to the end) I need to make sure everythng happens the way I wanted it to happen. So yes, I have been slacking on the updates. But trust me, I am working on it every chance I have. Sometimes though, these stories take over my entire thought process and I get nothing else done... lol

With a exhaled breath I can say that I am less tha one chapter from finishing their story. (Don't worry there's a few already done and not posted yet!)

Thanks :)




shan030709 (Signed) on May 26, 2010 11:11 pm (Chapter 29)
LOVE IT!!!!  Just what needed to happen!!

Author's Response:

I agree. As much as she played she was ok. She wasn't. She needed him.

Thanks :)




kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 26, 2010 06:06 pm (Chapter 29)
AWW that was the cutest thing ever. I'm glad she's with him. I love this PMS

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad I wasn't the cheesball and someone else actually thought it was cute vs. cheesy. I would fall to pieces if someone did this for me.

thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 24, 2010 11:25 pm (Chapter 29)
god i loved that oh so much :-) 

Author's Response:

I was personally selfish in this chapter bc this is so what I would want to happen if I were Bells. I think that heartfelt emotion from a man is a wonderful feeling :)

 

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 06, 2010 11:45 pm (Chapter 28)
very very nice love...see i told you i'd get my bloodline :-) keep it up <3

Author's Response:

Grrr! Your lucky I like you. Otherwise there would be no Bloodline.

 thanks girl!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2010 02:58 am (Chapter 27)
Aww man! Of course you would leave it there! I want it to be Justin but I never know. Sometimes you surprise. Great update! It broke my heart to see how strong she was pretending to be for Justin's sake and how upset he was for having to leave! Tugged at my heart! Again great update! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

Justin? Hmm why would he be in the apt? lol This chapter was full of ups and downs for her. We'll see how she handles it.

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2010 09:54 pm (Chapter 27)
oh i'm breathing alright mrs. *ahem* cliffhanger...fabulous job love!

Author's Response: Cliffhanger? What cliffhanger? Lo You will get to know sooon enough.



shan030709 (Signed) on Apr 26, 2010 09:53 pm (Chapter 27)
I don't know if breathe is a good thing or a bad thing!!!  I am so in love with the story and I cannot wait to keep reading!!  I sure hope it's not a bad thing someone is in the apartment.

Author's Response:

I seriously love that your in love with this story!! Makes me very happy :) I hope the person in their apt is a a good thing as well.




AmberW (Signed) on Apr 26, 2010 09:32 pm (Chapter 27)
Who is it??? You better have Kroll handy!

Author's Response:

It's Kroll standing in the flesh in her apartment!!! lol

I'm on my own with the objeccts flying at me, you have Kroll. :(




Lady T (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2010 08:28 pm (Chapter 26)
Omg! Sorry that her dad died. Totally loving Justin's character in this one. I'm ready for them to get married and have some babies :-)

Author's Response:

Married... babies... wow! That's really fast! Heck this is me were talking about, it could happen!! lol

 

Thanks:)




AmberW (Signed) on Apr 20, 2010 03:04 am (Chapter 26)

The Justin in this story is definitely not the arrogant jerk that he seems to sometimes be in real life.

I haven't reviewed in awhile (I know I suck) but I am now and I just can't help but say great job!  This chapter makes me sad, but all things happen for a reason!



Author's Response:

Actually this is how I imagine Justin would actually be like.

You do suck for not reviewing. Boo! but I'll forgive you, just this time. This was another sad chapter but you are right. Everything happens for a reason.

Thanks girly :)




JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2010 12:16 am (Chapter 26)
I'll have to agree with you. I'm so in love with the Justin in this story! I needed a tissue reading this chapter. Sad but great update! Can't wait for another one!

Author's Response:

Justin is.... o-mazing! love him. Its sad to see her goign through yet something else.

Thanks ;)




shan030709 (Signed) on Apr 19, 2010 10:41 pm (Chapter 26)
You did not warn us about needing tissues!!  It is heart wrenching and the bit about their being a problem with her shoes, is going to make for some dark days ahead for Arabella.  I can just feel it!!  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  You really did make Justin that much more loveable!!

Author's Response:

Crap, I did forget the tissue warning this time. I am usually good about that considering I cried everytime I read this chapter. I'm a sap (Shh dont tell anyone)

The problem with her shoes ... hmmm I'm writing this so you can only imagine! lol

I want to reach through this story and pick just up and squeeze him :)




CarolinBau (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2010 08:58 pm (Chapter 26)

Umm...Kind of confused about this I must say.

I really like the update and the Justin in the story, but I can't help but feel just weird to it... 



Author's Response:

Death isn't always easy to write about, or read about. I hope that I can make that issue up to you!

Don't hesitate to ask questions or throw ideas at me!

Thanks :)




XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2010 08:55 pm (Chapter 26)
C'mon Mel, hasn't she suffered enough? I love Bells but now i'm thinkin' of killin' some people in her family, specifically Omar. C'mon, the dude's letting his sister think that she killed her father? Not cool, man, not cool. I think i'd like to kill him first, then the mother, and i would kill the father but you took care of that for me. The sister not so much 'cause she wasn't as strict as the rest. I just hope things are much better for Bells. But hey, she's with Justin, things can only be better. Right?

Author's Response:

I dislike her sister more, I think. Don't get me wrong I dislike them all haha Her brother has let his guard down more than once. But they all suck! haha

Bells has suffered so much. But you cant really appriciate the good unless you've exp the hurt.

Thanks :)






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