Comments For A Face In The Hall
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 31, 2010 11:14 am (Chapter 4)
Oh, this is such a breat story :) I can't wait to see where you take these two.  Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!  I am so glad that you are liking it so far!



mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 18, 2010 11:10 pm (Chapter 4)
I have so many stories that I'm reading that I didn't want to start another, but oh am I glad I did.... I love a well written and laid out story, something I wish I could do, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you started reading it too!  And you already know that I am deep into "Salsa"!  Thanks so much for the review!



azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 06:29 pm (Chapter 4)

uhm...I think you may be my new favorite author!  This chapter was amazing!!  Even though it wasn't a happy chapter I loved every bit of it.  Your writing is very descriptive and I could see everything playing out like a movie in my head :)  Justin has definitly hit rock bottom, which is a hard place to be, but as soon as he gets his feet under him again I have a feeling that things are only going to go up from here.  I can't wait to find out what happens next! 



Author's Response: Awww thank you! Yeah it's a bit sad, but things may turn around you never know lol.  I was hoping you would see it that way as you read it, cause that's how it was playing out when I started writing it.  Yeah Justin is going through some inner turmoil at the moment...We'll have to wait and see if he turns things around for himself...I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far! =o)



Candace (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2010 05:53 pm (Chapter 4)

I feel so bad for her that she had to deal with both drunk bobby and drunk justin all the same night.  Poor cherish!  I loved how Justin was like "We just met, so you may not know that I'm a jackass."

LMAO!

Love this so far!

 



Author's Response: LOL, yeah Cherish is having a bad night, with both the man from her present and her past.  They are causing her nothing but stress right now.  LOL, well at least he admitted being a jackass...That's a good start right?  So glad you are enjoying it so far!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2010 08:38 am (Chapter 4)
great so far. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far!  Thanks so much for the review!



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 08:22 am (Chapter 4)
oh man...that last scene made me smile too...i love it

Author's Response: you know I had to change it up a little there...Didn't want to depress everyone too much lol.





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