Comments For A Face In The Hall
mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 18, 2010 11:10 pm (Chapter 4)
I have so many stories that I'm reading that I didn't want to start another, but oh am I glad I did.... I love a well written and laid out story, something I wish I could do, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you started reading it too!  And you already know that I am deep into "Salsa"!  Thanks so much for the review!


azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 06:29 pm (Chapter 4)

uhm...I think you may be my new favorite author!  This chapter was amazing!!  Even though it wasn't a happy chapter I loved every bit of it.  Your writing is very descriptive and I could see everything playing out like a movie in my head :)  Justin has definitly hit rock bottom, which is a hard place to be, but as soon as he gets his feet under him again I have a feeling that things are only going to go up from here.  I can't wait to find out what happens next! 



Author's Response: Awww thank you! Yeah it's a bit sad, but things may turn around you never know lol.  I was hoping you would see it that way as you read it, cause that's how it was playing out when I started writing it.  Yeah Justin is going through some inner turmoil at the moment...We'll have to wait and see if he turns things around for himself...I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far! =o)


Candace (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2010 05:53 pm (Chapter 4)

I feel so bad for her that she had to deal with both drunk bobby and drunk justin all the same night.  Poor cherish!  I loved how Justin was like "We just met, so you may not know that I'm a jackass."

LMAO!

Love this so far!

 



Author's Response: LOL, yeah Cherish is having a bad night, with both the man from her present and her past.  They are causing her nothing but stress right now.  LOL, well at least he admitted being a jackass...That's a good start right?  So glad you are enjoying it so far!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2010 08:38 am (Chapter 4)
great so far. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far!  Thanks so much for the review!


jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 08:22 am (Chapter 4)
oh man...that last scene made me smile too...i love it

Author's Response: you know I had to change it up a little there...Didn't want to depress everyone too much lol.


azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 07, 2010 01:54 pm (Chapter 3)
just started reading and I'm hooked!  can't wait to see what happens between these two  :)


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 06, 2010 01:13 pm (Chapter 3)
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

Author's Response: So glad you are liking it so far! =o)


jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 06, 2010 07:42 am (Chapter 3)
gosh, made me want my own Jack...poor J

Author's Response: I am going to need one to get through the next chapter. =o)


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 05, 2010 11:28 pm (Chapter 3)
Oh my gosh!  This is getting so good!  I can't wait for more!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 05, 2010 11:03 pm (Chapter 3)
I really like this story so far.... update soon!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2010 09:27 pm (Chapter 2)

Oh I'm with MissTasha on this one!  And the kid is good at bball?

I cannot wait for more!



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 04, 2010 07:53 am (Chapter 2)
A secret child? I love secret children! *happy dance* Please update soon.

Author's Response: LOL!  Well I hope to continue making you do the happy dance as the story progresses.  Glad you like it so far!


Tink (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2010 03:13 am (Chapter 2)
Really enjoying this so far, hope you post more soon!


Kim (Anonymous) on Mar 03, 2010 08:50 am (Chapter 1)
Oooo...This looks interesting.  More please!




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